Worth taking the time to read .
Just find this novel randomly and I can say that the story is interesting and love how the author put a lot of effort writing this novel and I can say that it has a lot of potential
To me, it's interesting to read this story not because the storyline only, it also have it's own evolution, and the writing is unique. For example, the MC asking the system to list down his ability. I hope he'll make some improvement, especially his grammar. That's all from me.
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It's only a few chapters, but the story seems very promising. I like the plot and your characters. The quality of the text is also good, I don't see any major grammar or stylistic errors.
Well done and keep up the good work, author.
the synopsis is like chinese novel i have read, mc have mysterious technique and betrayed by his disciple after that attacked by 7 or more people and reincarnatet in the body of servant of young miss
Tragic case of a novel completely falling apart. I really really enjoyed the first like 50 chapters, which is why this is so painful for me. I love the mc's cheat and how op he gets, but once he starts meeting and interacting with side characters the novel becomes absolute trash. Everyone around him has no brain and is constantly worshiping him for doing the most basic things. In addition to that, he's also is dumb and does lots of other inefficient/idiotic/excessively arrogant things. Like he tells the guild leader of one of the top guilds the basics of how to set up an ambush and how to position for a boss fight and everyone around him is shocked and amazed at his "genius" ideas. There's no way you can be the guild leader of a top guild and not know to put tanks in the front and healers in the back, etc. Dropped on ch113 because the author made everyone brainless
I finally found a novel that contains what I have searched for on this and other sites for over a year now: Realistic organized crime fiction.I like the story even if it feels a bit fast paced. Especially when between later chapters (20-30) it sometimes feels like some scene that was supposed to be in between, was skipped.Like it very much!Would recommend!9/10looking forward to new chapters :)
muy buen historia es muy estimulante el desarrollo que lleva el personaje des su transmigratorio como se desenvuelve en el entrono de los años 1500 se adapta el papel y desarrolla su ciudad para su propio beneficio y de su pueblo
De la grosse merde,je m'attendais a rien et j'ai quand même été déçu.
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My first story here , So far I can see this story have the potantial the be one of good stories here so I gave upvotes th
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