So after reading the entire story (995 chapters) here are my thoughts
the story is barely "ok"
its fighting scenes are pathetic and feels like turn base games instead of a real fight.
MC at some point has so many xxxxxxxxx% more damage and yyyyyyyyy% weak stats for monster that its a wonder why the hell the mobs are still standing in his presence. its really stupid.
the RL part of the story is ok.
I have to say...the story could had been ok if the fighting scenes were interesting but are pathetic. you can skip them most of the time and go for the ending.
most of the quest are done but in a very rush way at the end of the story. so again way too lame.
at least it has an ending.
the story is similar to sword god and legendary guardian but i'll put this below both.
P.S.: its a miracle that those guys still have the chapters even though they died so many times and those were suppose to drop on dead 100% chance
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It was good, but needs improvement .
The author can do better.
The story line is interesting, But needs more info about various things, as the readers may get confused, on what they're reading.
Some may know but mostly won't.
Anyways Good work!
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This book is a hidden gem! Although it's not suitable for ******* readers that don't really.like complicated novels that much but for me, I really do like it. If you want to have many readers then try to simplify your point. The characters might lack some development since its slow but I can handle it. I gave it a 5 star since I really do like genres like this. If I were a normal reader then maybe I'll leave a 4 to 3-star rating! Anyways continue writing and improving. Your grammars, tenses, and vocabulary that needed proofread for your book to be more appealing!
this is a good novel to me in every aspect hope you start back up again. this is worth five stars cant wait to see were this story goes keep up the good work
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5 Star for the Cover! 5 Star for the Cover!
5 Star for the Cover! 5 Star for the Cover!
5 Star for the Cover! 5 Star for the Cover!
The story development is very interesting.The managemet of each characters is superb.There is a little issue on the writting but overall it is amazing.I hope you can go forward and produce more amazing content for us.[img=recommend]
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