Kelvar10_
Hi ladies and gentlemen, as you may notice, the releasing speed is quite slow this month since I'm during my master final season, and since I'm going back to China for a month, I have overwhelming tasks to deal with right now. Anyways, I apologize for being slow this month. And I'll try to do at least one chapter everyday, or more, in December during my break.Thank you all again for showing the support to this novel.Love you folks all!
This novel is good, however the author seemed to forget what they were writing at a certain point and replaced characters and their backgrounds, at first Sophie was the MC's sister, then she became an orphan and just a subordinate. There also wasn't much character development for Alex, the fact that she was previously a guy with a family before was completely forgotten and then was said that she's an orphan instead. She also conveniently made incredibly stupid decisions as she got stronger for the sole purpose of pushing the plot forwards. The levelling also made no sense as it was clearly just use to level up characters when the author wanted them to, rather than making any sense in exp gain(which was never even explained properly)Overall, a good premise, however, with poor execution
If I put it in a simple way, this story will catch your heart and make you addicted... So read at your own risk ?I request you to give us more chapters ?
I really have no words, it has everything I could ask for its??
I came to read it, as an event was going on, to get free FPs, but I stayed for the plot.?The author got me hooked for this story.? I really can't wait to read more of it.?u200d↕️ Please upload new chapters. ??Everyone, do give it a try! It's really very interesting. I'm sure you'll all love it.?So far, soooo goooood?
Plot holes. Confusing backstory with things unexplained. Writing feels like it lacks planning. Mc makes poor choice in particular in how he spends his points and overall interacts with the system. Terrible name choices. And strange behavior from other characters that doesn't make much sense.
So far (40 chaps) its amazing..5 stars deserved..???????????????????????????????????????????????????
A unique concept.... For me cos i rarely see a book with this concept. A robot with a few flesh and blood? Cool! Lake made entirely of beers? Just imagining that makes me drunk!
Lol, author has so many accounts, he reviewed himself, haha, this novel is not bad, a decent one, anyway I’ll just write this to complete 140 words.
Best story available.hell it has everything I love very detailed story line which will keep you interested ...................,,................::
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow? XXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXPXP
