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This is alright. The writing quality is better then 90% of most trial reads. This may be a good one but I am kind of bored of cultivation novels. Give it a go if you don't mind the whole cultivation schtick, but I'm done with them.
I think author should delete the spammed reviews because it's too much.
Anyways, the plot and concept is kinda interesting but the execution is lacking.
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The characterisation of the different people appearing in this story is what sold me on it. The worldbuilding is good and the characters are enjoyable to read about. I think there are certain aspects of this story that could be done better, like the formatting of the text in some parts. However, other than that, it is a book with a lot of promise and I hope to see the author get even better in the future. Good luck, keep it up!
Superb cultured writing, and the plot supporting it with the mc being a former failed experimentation who had enough of the world is good. Keep going author
really liked it, its rare to find stories like these here but I'm glad I did, the feel of old times and a different aspect of people during war that's something to die for good read cant wait for more
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well what to say it is great it was some times confusing but it is great I really like the idea and I really like hope u continue the story and don't drop it
only read a few chapters, it's another story that don't make sense.First Flaw and utterly ruined it for me was that it's a xianxia world, the guy has a system that gave him an op training area that boosts cultivation by 9 times. Guess what instead of using it yourself and becoming strong enough and then inviting disciples (system influences him too using rewards) he invites a guy that he doesn't know anything about and is much much stronger than him and thn reveals the cheat training area and then somehow everything goes fine when he imposes a rule of only 8 hours a day.
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every word of this story is impressing i like too much this novel include every chapter
Honestly, I can't help but give this a one hundred percent 5 star review because this is just that good. I mean it has awesome characters and an amazing concept for a story. I myself personally have grown numb to the amount of OP protagonists that are always so fucking dark I mean, don't get me wrong I love those but this is just a nice refreshing change of pace for once. You can tell that the story doesn't take itself too seriously all the time which usually Boggs down a lot of stories. But this has a happy go lucky vibe throughout so that makes the moments where it hits you with something truly tragic or ****ed up it's a lot more impactful.