Phoebus_Aphos
The novel has 2 million recommendations with current weekly recommendation reaching 1000+, this signifies that there is a lot of interest among CN readers. So, I expect a lot from this novel ergo I'm rating 5 for expectation! Will review later.
This is the author here.
I suck at reviews so I just tend to write my thoughts. These are my thoughts going into writing the story.
I’ll drop ‘reviews’ like this after different milestones.
Alright. Let’s begin.
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Review at Chapter 0.
Idea: An Assassin, without any magical ability assassinating mana-empowered humans and beasts mostly with intelligent attacks and/or simply cool methods. Who said ordinary humans can’t kill super-humans?
The story should be told completely from the Assassin’s perspective.
Premise: The Strongest soldier (Self-proclaimed) in one world is killed and reincarnates into a parallel world where he becomes the Apex assassin (Self-proclaimed).
Setting: A blend of 21st Century Cities with 19th century (Victorian era) societal elements on a backdrop of never-ending war between mana-enhanced humans and beasts.
POV: The Story is styled as an extract from the Main Character’s memoir so it is completely in the MC’s Point of view and based on his personal bias.
P.S: A sweet old grandma could very well be presented as a villainous old woman who constantly disturbs the MC’s life. (Just an example. Doesn’t really happen... I think.)
M.C: Due to the experiences of his first life and the circumstances of his death, the MC will come off as cynical and methodical. He is very thorough in the planning and execution of his assassination and leaves nothing to chance when he works.
P.S: The MC claims not to have any abilities in one breath, yet on the other hand, claims to have been blessed by Loki. Makes you wonder, isn’t the blessing in itself an ability
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I feel like I got baited by the synopsis.
I must say that I've been waiting 3 full weeks before this book obtained enouth votes, si I am happy now.
I'll go to the main points now, first on the wrighting qualty, wile I've been reading books in english for three years now, I can't say I'm proficient in ortograph so my point of view may not be of interest to you but so far, I didn't see notable mistakes.
Second as the book just started being translated we can't be sure about the stability of updates but I'll just say that the 18th chapter was updated 20 hours ago while the 17th was 10 hours ago, not saying it is bad, but it may be bad.
For the story developpement, it's fine, I mean, in other books the mc is like "I'm hearing voices and seeing floating textes, fine I'll follow their orders" while the corect thing to think is "am I crazy? Like, in my brain?" But some weirds happening, the sister of the unicorn man find the mc's house but I don't remember the mc telling them where he lives. But overall, it's okay.
For the character desing, well the mc is the classical "I don't talk much and I'm cold headed and I'm beautifull" but you now what, I don't hate what is classical! but he is a bit lucky, beeing choosen out of a full room of doctors and interns to help,while he was playing on is phone, I'm okay withe the fact that a girl will mostly go to a charming guy, but when it comes to work, you won't takes the risk to bring someone who is playing on his phone at work to help just because he is dashing, your putting yourself in danger of being fired.
For the world backgroud I don't know, it seems futuristic with the transformers (I don't now about others countrys but in france transformers are a bunch of giant robots who can transform in vehicles) but my lack of medical knowledge stop me from judging anithing about the hospital.
All in all, It's very good for now, and I'm waiting to see what's next! (I hope the 19th chapter will be out before the 20th)
TOO MUCH NONSENSE
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How did this stolen novel get selected. This is bringing the farm to live in another world.
How did this stolen novel get selected. This is bringing the farm to live in another world.
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Highly advise not to read
Author dropped the novel at chapter 166
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the Novel is really great!! Thank you so much for your creativity, it was the perfect novel for me at the moment but you see im actually just a free reader here, so I just feel unfortunate to not be able to follow through the book but thank you anyway.
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