Phoebus_Aphos
Wait actually ignore my comment I realize what you're talking about now yeah now I don't even know what's going on I'm very confused
Does the horrible translation get better
Shameless author here. :)
This book wears it's inspirations on it's sleeve. But at the same time I would like to think that I have done something different here.
What to expect from this story:
-Good character development.
-Good fights.
-Good characters.
Feel free to read. And if you like it please drop a review. If not then I still wouldn't mind a review. Constructive criticism is valued.
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author here the only thing I can promise about this novel is greatness. feel free to ask me any questions and support.
Can't make a complete review, as I just started reading, but you need to correct the ponctuation. Every time there is a "," or ".", the spacing is incorrect, making it very weird to read.
does hypnosis hook me? I hope that it won't let me down because it has such a good concept. for now, I'll give it a five stars, I will change it as the story progresses. I'm looking forward to the execution of the story.
can anyone tell me if this contains harem or not?
loved reading this book nicely written
Love the book!!! Look forward to new updates!!!
I love it ...
