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Wow this novel is really popular, if Concubine Lan knew, she would definitely be grinning from ear to ear!
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Spirit Soul plays a huge role in the Multiverse of my stories. Because of that, I can only recommend my other novels.
However, because I'm shameless, I'm gonna say that this is the best story I've written so far.
As such, give it a try, and don't have any prejudice against my poor MC :3
Copy and paste of the other system store owner novels, except worse.
First off, the writing quality is abysmal. It's to the point where it's hardly legible. Theres a couple different qualities of MTL's, and this is arguably one of the worst. The writing quality outright ruins the novel to begin with.
The story development, character design, and world background are extremely poor. I can't say much about the world background since I didn't read that far, but based on how much this is copying from other novels, I can only give it two stars. Characters? Same as other system store novels. First customer is a young master who incidentally buys seemingly overpriced goods and is amazed about how good they are, thus leading to new customers. Story development? Well, I'm just going to skip over that, just a blatant copy.
Overall, this novel is pretty substandard, even for this site.
Wow. what are ending. I cant get over all the twist and turn and the ending is really something else. the suspense is too much hope to see a second book
The trial read is fantastic and the only thing you should know before reading is that its missing the romance tag, not really romance but their is some lovey dovey moments between the mc and his bonded human
I really liked this novel and its idea, i haven't seen a lot of the characters but they aren't so bad. Mc isn't so smart yet not so dumb.
I think i need to clarify something, MC is male not female. The synapse is wrong.
There are some face slapping at the beginning of the novel but i think that they won't last for a long time before it is over since mc only need to prove that what he wrote is wright one time and they won't say anything again.
Just try it and see if you like it.
Typical Novell about pet shop&cultivating, nothing interesting, the author is a school guy.
The plot is boring, there are some love interested , but they are too typical and there is not intrigue.
Extremely mediocre book. It's legible so it's better than a lot of stories on here, but everything else is kind of a mess. Every other sentence ends in an exclamation point to try and create fake excitement. Please stop saying "RUMBLE!" in completely random spots that make zero sense.
Loving it, basically finding it enjoyable the more I read it. I am finding the MC is well thought out and overall character and world development isn't rushed.
its rare to find good taming novels, give this one a go and you'll be suprised
Eita banda heichi
Cool concept for a Mc distrust of organisations due to past life. Mc was a very skilled assassin loner orphan betrayed by organisation that raised and trained him, almost survived....
The Mc heart starts to thaw when the hosts body he transmigration to is the elder brother of an pair of siblings, their family that has been slaughtered and he's the Mc is saved by his younger brother.
The Mc accept his new life and family, triggering the system which he distrust as to him he feels its like the previous organisation issuing missions etc.... interesting concept, wanting to control his own life destiny not be dictated but missions from the organisation system.
The writing style is clean and gets u attached to the characters. There is a few minor grammar issues once in a while could be predictive text. but easy to work out.
Very enjoyable keep up the good work.
