Great story, the concept is original so no stereotypes. Character development is well done, writing style and spelling are not confusing. The concept and adaptability of Andrew to new situations imagined by the author are perfect.
Do not roll your eyes! This is a really good story!
It's a good novel. I enjoy it a lot and think that once it has more chapters, it'll be one of the bests on this site. It already has better grammar than most of the novels I've read so that's a plus. Other than that, the powers are cool and the Mc is rational but still shows that he's human.
Overall, if we give it time to grow, the novel will be amazing. So for now, I'll give it 5 stars. I just hope author doesn't rush anything.
The book was quite appealing. Combining rebirth and Video game in a unique and pleasant way made it quite enjoyable. But I kinda wonder, a guy with eidetic memory and was average Joe..
best novel i've read in my life, 100% should read, if you don't I'll eat your toes, this is a very unique novel and deffo should win. deserves to be adapted into a movie I agree I agree. best two main characters in the world
This is great honestly, I enjoyed this read . Would keep updates on this and highly recommend to Viking lore lovers, good Job to the author...✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️???????✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️
All I can say is that it does not deserve anything less than 5 Star Rating. Character development, story building, mc mentality | all points are very good.⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐One of the best is mc's thinking and nature. Well I never personally liked over kind protagonist.Good Job Author-san??
Do you have discord so people can talk to u? I want to ask u something about the book..
Writing Quality 4/5: Good word diversisty and well structured sentences, the reader won't struggle here. There are however a few minor typo's every few chapter that are probably due to autocorrect. I.E: Brian becomes brain.Story Development 4.5/5: The story focuses Mc's inventions/discoveries used for the betterment of others, be it individuals or entire communities. Something I'd like more of is POV's from different characters it's one thing to see the improvements of the Burtons via the MC another entirely from the POV of say a guard.Character Design 4/5: The MC is too OP... Well that is sort of the point but I think I'd enjoy the story more if the MC had to work together with say Ceasar to perfect the manuals for the major heavenly laws. In the end it feels as if other major characters in the story can never measure up to the MC.Updating Stability 5/5: Seems to update frequently, I just binged nearly 300 chapters so I'll just leave 5/5.World Background 4.5/5: Starts out as pretty standard xinxia fare I.E: eight kingdoms, 4 empires multiple planets. While you read the story however the book/novel takes the time to introduce dukes and the royal family from both the Mc's kingdom and foreign kingdoms.
i am actually cultivation bigshot was ok cause it was original. this novel just steals the idea and adds nothing original nor good. just forced and boring story.
Another gaming novel -_-
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Horrible, misunderstandings and conflicts that can be solved with just a sentence or a call is stretched out to 3-6 chapters.
MC says that he's realized the importance of power, yet he doesn't actively do something to acquire it even though he has a cheat that can insta-learn everything with just a glance(in some ways it's more OP than LOHP). He doesn't surf the web for useful manuals i.e programming, other language, martial arts..etc. those things he can master in just 10 minutes but he doesn't seem to want them.
MC hesitates to join an organization that equals the military even though he says power is important.
People annoys him and wants to/tries to kill him yet he just leaves them with either a swollen face or at worst a broken arms or legs.
He says he doesn't want the limelight and doesn't want to show off, but his actions are everything but.
Spolier:
A perverted martial instructor was assigned to their class and was very unreasonable, feeling the girls and beating the guys with the slightest bit of disagreement. MC could have this instructor replaced and punished with just a call cuz he's a benefactor of someone higher in the organization but nooooo.
MC decided to challenge him to a duel, even though he doesn't want the limelight, doesn't want to show off. After he beat the instructor, comes the instructor's older brother, MC still decided to beat the guy even though he doesn't want the LIMELIGHT.
With his cheat the book could be more interesting, but the author wants his story to be about everything overused and wants nothing to do with originality.
Tl;dr
Op cheat, dumb mc, hypocrite mc, negative IQ villains, typical wuxia, overused tropes.