"You must have a serious death wish to go off into combat without your aura to defend you! Are you retarded?!" Jackson was visibly fuming, with a glare so intense that it caused Aaron finch back an inch.
Tnx for the chapter. Need more
Writing is ok, seems like reasonably stable updates. The logic of the author falls on its face when it comes to military families and especially military orphans. The idea that the military would take away benefits from orphans of men who fell while presumably still at war, is frankly idiotic, especially since their new "asset"won't be worth anything for decades to come.In the meantime they are giving the finger to every other Mecha pilot, who now know that if they die the government will go back on its word in terms of supporting their families. That's probably not good for morale, nor for building loyalty to the government. Which means they are trading dubious gains in the future - apparently it's allowed to be a wastrel - in return for a massive hit on morale here and now, while still at war. Lol 0 for logic.Character design is okWorld is generic.
i really like the writing style. well thought out story
Shit ton of plot armour didn't get far because of how immature the MC is. Thinking he is a god when he can easily be squashed so plot armour commence I can bear with the typos an half sentence but God damn this MC is supposed to be smart as all get up yet bitches an moans like Oliver does... From what i see author has a superiority complex or is narcasistic or just wants atte ruin everyone has to adore an be shocked every time a MC gets into a little battle just seems so conveniently set up to do just so gonna have to drop unfortunately
Extremely bad translation. The terms keep changing every chapter.
More!!!!!!!!! I love this novel so much!!!!!
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Please leave a review so I can enhance my grammar and also how to write more story.Also please guide me in writing some of the novels and also, I hope I can request someone who can make a picture of my novel?It will really be a great help.Please enjoy reading my first time novel.Thanks again guys!
Okay for new readers, here's my message for you, 'read at least 5 chapters before you decide to drop it'. This story is based on emotions, the inner world of a person, he might be a prodigy of music for others but within himself. it is his journey towards his future as he comes to term with his present and maybe his past in later chapters.I liked what I read, this is not your fast food style novel, rather you need to sit down & invest yourself to enjoy it.
I like it so far it is new novel but if it is go like start contract guaranteed. Good job author ?????????????????????????????????????????????
My attention is just caught on the title and synopsis honestly. Like "Doronavirus" bruh. Ahh...But I still read it and it was certainly different from what I expected. Its good work aside from me laughing for the titles and stuff so shall give a try to this one? ~