I see people giving it a bad rating and I feel bad because I love this story there is amazing character development the authors wrighting improves although the beginning is a little meh it gets a whole lot better and that whole meh part just becomes character development although I was look for a different type of story this completely surprised me and I love it during the beginning it might seem like the mc was wasting his time later in the story the skill that he got during that time are not very visible but important to the story and the character it's slow pasted but every chapter and event bring more understanding to the world around and the characters the mc does start with only 2 people on his side that slowly changes it's part of the slow pasted and it not like he magically get more people on his side he has to talk and create friendship or his original 2 I do think the title fits as not only do I think that we are only seeing the beginning of what the system can do I also think that there is no other title that fits this story I hope people see this review and don't worry about the bad reviews and get at least 100 in that is definitely when you have seen its charm the bad reviews are probably people from the beginning chapters and didn't really get into the real story
WARNING: Reading this story might make your little brother grow 2 inches longer. Read it at your own risk.
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EXTREMELY SEXUAL
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Don't read this in public places
Can't wait to find out what will he do to make the girl stay. Keep it up author. Looking forward to know the answer. Love it. Highly recommend.
Wooow!
I love the idea of the story, especially its Sci-fi. I love the character's development, the storyline is perfect.
Job well done, Author.
You really have a wide spectrum of imagination. To make up different scenarios of differing settings is truly a creative feat. It is amusing that the POV is like the narration of the readers, letting us be more intimate with the story.
As always, grammatical errors are something that we have to take into account when writing. They can be easily corrected and will able you to have a better progression in your passages.
Each scenarios can be a story on their own, that is provided. However, I do feel, as opposed to the other review, that the pacing is quite hurried? I don't really know how to word it, but yes, it feels like that. Also, in between dialogues, please put in a little bit of transition, so it wouldn't be as lengthy as it is now. Let the information flow out through the whole chapter instead of clumping them in one paragraph.
All in all, this is a great test for imaginative people. It is exciting to read different worlds in each chapter! You are a great writer, so please continue writing! I'm gonna be cheering you on!
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This is an interesting novel to write anything about. The reason being, it is one of those novels you either love or hate. There is no middle ground for this one. Also, I want to clear this at the beginning that this is merely my impression of the book till chapter 50, NOT A REVIEW OF THE ENTIRE BOOK. Hence, Anything I say is subjected to change due to character development. Furthermore, as I am not a fan of big fan of the harem genre, it might be slightly biased regarding the harem trope. I apologize if that happens and welcome all types of correction and valid arguments(not the type saying if you don't like it, write your own book).
I am pretty sure most of the readers came for this story like me, by looking at the synopsis and the promise it holds. A gun-wielding, magicless MC in a sword and sorcery isekai-world who is aiming for the top is an interesting premise. I like the world and its magic system. It's simple and easy to understand. you get everything you can hope for in a fantasy world, from sword to magic, from elf to demon, and everything in between. The magic system and leveling up are pretty straightforward and without any headache-inducing complexity. In short, the premise and the world itself are pretty solid and familiar.
I want to divide the characters between MC and other characters because this particular MC needs some explanation. Other than MC, all other characters are familiar, at least if you have been around anime long enough. I am not saying they are poorly written or anything. Contrary to that they are by the book(except one) and as a result, you just don't see any unique characters. This will change in the future if the author decides to do some heavy-duty character development and some interesting backstory is added. The exception to that is Gracier IMO. I still think her attitude doesn't match her age or backstory and hope to see a major character development soon that will make her act her age.
Now, I have a serious love-hate relationship with this MC. I love his demeanor and thought process during combat and hate his interaction with female characters. I would like to request everyone, especially people who aren't accustomed to a harem, not to drop it in chapter 1 when he pops up that knight talk. Things get more normal after that and around chapter 9 you can actually see a bit of character development. However, Till chapter 50 he is extremely dependant on his gun spirit regarding decision making which I don't like much. But I am hoping it will soon change as he gains more knowledge about the world and his power. TLDR: Socially MC is a garden-variety harem MC. In combat: He is intelligent, mature, and innovative.
Writing style-wise author's first language might not be English. because there are quite a few miss-spelling and wrong word choices. I also noticed there are some discrepancies in certain stats. The good news is the author took notice of it and promised to fix it and hire an editor. So, no point in making an issue out of it.
Lastly, give it a try. See how you feel reading it as every person has different tastes. However, if you love a typical harem MC, with familiar character types, this is a perfect read for you.
I have currently read up to chapter 565.
This review will contain spoilers but I recommend people to keep reading because the entire story pretty much gets destroyed around chapter 500; and I wouldn't want someone to waste his time reading up to that point.
Up until around chapter 500 this story was one of my favorite books on this site; the characters were interesting and the concept of having 2 main characters was extremely unique and entertaining.
Unfortunately, for some reason the author decided to do the worst possible mistake he could have done, kill off 90% of the characters and story-lines.
After introducing and developing many characters and storylines into the book, the author has decided to cut them all of all together by literally destroying the planet on which the story took place.
To me it seemed like the author didn't like what he built up to that point and thus decided to completely restart the entire plot line, leaving behind many unfinished side plots, and characters who were introduced but not properly developed.
To make things worse, after this "plot twist" took place, the main characters of the story who remained alive didn't show any signs of grief that should have taken place considering almost everyone they ever loved had died.
Considering I had a truly loved this book before the major "plot twist" took place, I implore the author to please explain why he decided to make such a unreasonable change to the story.
Thank you for reading this review, and sorry for any grammar or spelling mistakes that might have been in it as English isn't my first language.
Concept is cool but everything else is pretty bad.The MC doesn't even try to hide it, it's pretty bland, MC is prideful and 2D, it's brain-dead is the best description.If you want something generic, boring and overly sensitive but also prideful MC turn off your brain and read this.
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