Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
It's a fresh story focusing on a first cultivator but due to not having anything exciting happening in the story it makes the reading experience very dull.
I’m already hooked. What a well written story!
Keep writing author. It’s a good novel with high potential. Don’t give up, your hard work will pay off.
I really love this book! The synopsis is very capturing and writing style is very good! Readers wont be disappointed by this and the hype is well deserved! Good work author!
The story is set in a world filled with dungeons caused by some solar storm. ??Our MC is pathetically weak in the beginning , but is not a coward and does not panic too much in life threatening situations .The characters are particularly well written, with realistic personalities. Also our MC has a unique system called "The Information System ".Not much is told about it since the MC is weak as of now(14 chapters). Personally, I didn't feel any problems reading this novel. There weren't any major grammatical errors. ??This novel definitely has potential and has peaked my interest. It's definitely worth reading . There are no slow parts and although it's not a difficult read, it is very engrossing. ☺☺Keep up the good work and hope that your writing gets better in the coming chapters ??
I love this novel!It completely suits my style I'm going to vote for it everyday! Hope you never stop this novel in the middle.Hope you release more chapters!
this story is really interesting and I hope it continues like this. to go into the details of why I liked then already even though an already popular theme the author managed to write an original story and that remains always interesting. moreover the main performance is rather well written when the other characters ben for the moment is not too much but saw how it starts I think the author will certainly continue to describe well and think of the other characters. author continuous like that
This story updates slowly, but consistantly. It is meant to be a funny read and the author manages to pull it off. We have a male protagonist still denying his homosexual tendencies (but nevertheless acting on it), a beautiful ML and as the best side character - a system which is clearly a fujoshi, torn between getting the host back in character and cheering him on. Oh, and for the readers of Touch of irony: The crow is back! :D
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Great work. The author has done a great job bringing Andrew to life. The twist that comes and him having the courage to start over. It is truly inspiring. A great read. Cant wait to read what happens next.
Good. Yet at the same time needing improvement.This novel seems to be a lighthearted and happy experience of someone trying to make money for the correct reasons. A story in which the Main Character is nicely thrown into a world he had no want to be a part of, yet now inside the ¨pit¨ he will take up the stick given to him and charge at the beast that is the Idol industry and its managing side. My score might be on the low side, but I hope to be raising it in the future :D