It starts off with ok grammer and a ok story but then it goes down hill fast. The mc is reincarnated but he acts childish, any problem he faces he hypnotizes people. The grammer gets so bad i don't know what is going on in certain parts of the story. Also it uses greek terminology which is find but its never explained what the words mean, so its gibberish mixed in with ****ty grammer.
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That's a really interesting story setting, especially those dark elements in the prologue, I found it's really interesting.
Your ideas for the story is really special and different from any other works I have read, I don't know how should I put it, but it's a good different. I'm impressed at your courage and creativity in writing this unique idea of story background.
This story is really an eye-catching one because it not only talks about reborn but also the arrogance of the character is really amazing. Not knowing that he was reborn, others just keep on putting themselves into danger which is very normal but the characyer is really amazing to be able to defend himself greatly.
Webnovel still want to translate trash novels like these?Come on! It's exactly the same plot each time with the mc that are always the same and the author that try to put a maximum of fillers in the fighting chapters!!!
Well i haveNt read tHe book Yet but since it for the xp here we are i hOpe it will be good tho so that i can enjoy anOther good novel on this well good luck authOr and please suprIse me
Wow! This novel put me in a roller coaster ride! Keagan was diagnose with cancer and live his life to the fullest. YOLO!...Yeah...the Author writes a compelling and interesting story that is a page turner! I juts hope down the line, that Keagan will see the other side of life! The meaningful and rewarding side! So far, he's a energetic and full of mischief! An entertaining novel that put a smile on my face and also shocked me! Good job Author! Keep it up!
Though the story seemed serious, there is comic relief in it making me laugh while reading it.. ..Good job author with a good world along with cute and interesting characters. .. I loved it. .
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Sci-fi isn't really my thing but this particular book is mind blowing. The synopsis was obviously the first thing that gripped me then came the prologue, truly exquisite. Keep up the good work author.?
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Aside from a couple of issues, it's quite good. The biggest problem is when two of the girls in the harem cheat on the MC behind his back, which totally doesn't make sense considering their established personalities, not to mention it came out of nowhere without any prior hints. Was a bad move and disgusted a lot of readers. Even I, a generally chill person, had to stop reading for a few weeks just to stop feeling pissed off. There were a few other annoying things, too, but they are easier to overlook. All in all, it's worth the read so long as you're prepared to be angry at the author from time to time.