Grand_Void_Daoist_45
I'm only at chapter 11. Overall it's been alright so far. Don't be tricked by its rating, those are from the bots. It's not bad but not good. I'd give it a 3.5/5. The problem I have with the novel is that it's very vague. There is almost no description of the settings at all. We have no clue what the city looks like or what the mc's workplace looks like. When the mc enter a town, there was no description of what it looked like at all. There is also no backstory of the mc at all. We only know that he came from the earth. Side characters are also very bland. We don't get many interactions between the mc and the side characters. There's also a lot of show, don't tell. An example from the novel is when the mc asked Gu Bo how to tell the difference between beast wounds and corpse puppet wounds, "Starting from a corpse on the far end, Gu Bo pointed at its wound and explained the nuances in a low voice. These were useful and practical knowledge, so Su Jingxing listened closely and memorized everything. When Gu Bo was done explaining, the investigation was still underway". Very lazy writing from the author. Overall, if you're looking to waste your time then this novel's up for that. If you're looking for a quality novel to read then skip this novel. Don't listen to those vague reviewers who give out 4 or 5 stars like it's gold. Unless you're a kid then you probably have no idea how mediocre this novel is.
he can edit but he only did it 4 times he still can edit about 5 more times then he made himself with much potential yet he always goes after other's opportunities that make his talent pointless as if it's only an excuse for the auther to make him powerful cultivation system is messed up, every time he talk about strength he must make feel wrong for example at 7th level divine sea realm he can fight an illumination realm powerhouse yet when on 1sr illumination realm he can only fight a 3rd level one so author wasted the entire world background like that he wasted 2 edit opportunities makeing an elixir work on an cultivation less than it supposedly be taken for example blood cloud powder that can increase cultivation speed by 10 times but can only be take by divine sea realm or above huh when you edit it it becomes can be take by any realm Remember editing must be logical there's no logic here since a strong medicine can brust with much energy for low levels one's to absorb now then instead of editing elixir data why not find a source to get resources ?? why not try to create opportunities that's much better than stealing other's in which you could use these people as followers thus building a power for himself ??
The reviews all looked good but the story just seems like super generic face slapping situations and a protagonist that walks around like he is god amongst men.
Might end up better later, but for now seems cliche and generic
Phenomenal! Easily the most VIVID story I have read on WebNovel. I have rarely encountered such writing quality that can take me on the journey alongside the characters. I can not say how far above the quality is of this story is above any that I have read on this platform. Well done Author, well done. I am looking forward to seeing more of this world that you paint so well.
You know, with all the five-stars reviews that I can get, I believe that at least one, true 1 star would be a nice addition.
But on a more serious note, welcome everyone to yet another of Sloth's productions!
This time, we are tackling the topic of dungeons. Is the Dungeons Online game just a game? What does the memory of Tom hide? What kind of wonders can you expect in it?
Well, just read the first few chapters and you will find out!
Romance: Yeah, not sure when though
Action: A lot
Plot: Heck, do you even need to ask?
PLOT: most likely
Isekai: Truck-ku aprooved
Gaming system: Exists but doesn't interrupt the story
Should I read: If you like a good story, then... OF COURSE YOU SHOULD!
a big "No!" for this trash copycat.....
a big "No!" for this trash copycat.....
a big "No!" for this trash copycat.....
a big "No!" for this trash copycat.....
a big "No!" for this trash copycat.....
a big "No!" for this trash copycat.....
a big "No!" for this trash copycat.....
a big "No!" for this trash copycat.....
a big "No!" for this trash copycat.....
a big "No!" for this trash copycat.....
a big "No!" for this trash copycat.....
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a big "No!" for this trash copycat.....
Hello everyone,
Anyone have doubts about this book, you can ask me here.
Translation kinda sucks, but oh well. Story is pretty enjoyable, and it’s fun to read lots of cliches when you are bored. Really hope they expand more on this world though.
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La historia se me hace bastante interesante anque no se porque la gente lo califica con puntajes tan bajos. Espero que cuando llege a los 40 capitulos no lo dejen de traducir como muchas otras novelas
I, a Hundred Billion Boss, Signed in the City for Eight Years! on MTL Novel
First 40 chapters are fine, but as soon as you start paying for it the quality drops precipitously... from chapter 41 onwards it is straight MTL with zero editing, not even fixing capitalization of MC name or standardizing the previous translation. You may as well read this novel on a MTL a site, I am not joking at all.
