shivkira
Honestly, no offense author but your mc sounds like grandma.
I just don’t like the way the novel is set up. Seems like mc gets everything without working for it.Otherwise, the story has no purpose. For example, leylin from Warlock of Magus World wanted to find the truth about everything and that was his purpose which made for an excellent read. As such, novels without purpose are dull.
well i think it is going to be a bomb buttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt pls let not be like TDG going half way but stopping regular updates i mean once a month soooooooooooo boring.wating a year for just 12 chapters
Yet another filth power-stoned by bot users staining this website's top ten power stone ranking. What a cheap and lazy way to provide exposure to an unnoticed, poorly viewed translated novel. People rarely read it for a reason.
It's pretty bad, the timing of the skills in the fights is inconsistent and the plot is forced.
I just read through all of the chapters available for this novel, up to 247, and I must say that I have been thoroughly enjoying this novel.I didn't have a lot of expectations going in but the quality of the work and the depth that each character and situation had to them truly kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time, making me want to keep reading.It is a very complex story with a lot of elements that I know some people might not particularly enjoy or may be off putting to them, but getting past the hiccups in the beginning and understanding a bit more about the situation that isn't very apparent on the surface level has been a truly rewarding experience, and I recommend you if you have just wandered by this to give the novel a chance.Some parts of the story I didn't particularly care for (for example, *perhaps a bit spoiler, just scroll all the way down. I didn't mark the review as spoiler because the larger portion of this review doesn't have any, and this is just for providing some criticism for the Author*............The introduction of the third world didn't really hook me in to much, and I ended up skipping to the end of the larger arc that happened because I wasn't as invested into it like I was with his original world and the second world he found himself in. It seemed particularly random at first, and the events didn't seem to have much of an important place in the story [though, I may just be ignorant as I hadn't read through it too much. I will say, I've been able to keep up with the story for the most part without getting any context from this part of the story]. Author, one criticism I'd have when you go about this again is to try and give a more solid connection to the new world and the character and his reasons for going there to create more investment for the reader. It seemed forced and out of place the way that it happened.).*END of spoilers*..............Truly a hidden gem, it's a shame that it is so underrated as I am writing this review, and I can only offer words of praise to the author for giving so much effort into your novel here. Please keep going, I'm excited to see what happens next with the story.
Shadow hack vibes. The premise seems cool just like shadow Hacks.But well his family is an ass. And side characters so far are annoying as can be. The Mc is a brick so far with the personality. and well overall the translation is better than most on this site, so that is a plus alongside the release rate. most of this is pretty boring though, hopefully this has something cool happen eventually.
Such an intriguing novel. I can't get enough of it. Thank you author for this masterpiece. I'm your great fans
Great story can’t stop reading
Love this book got the perfect mixture of friends and family, happyness an sadness
Good book so far. I liking all the characters and how they end up. Great story line as well.
i seriously hope that they both fin d out now . puleaseee
