Good novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Storylines is good, plot is good, english translation is good and basically the novel is good so far. 5 Star to support you! Hope you won't drop it and if you do want to drop it, at least drop it when novel at least 100+ chapters. I'm supporting you! Don't give up!
nice story Very informative and entertaining
long live super lazy sect!!!
long live super lazy sect!!!
long live super lazy sect!!!
long live super lazy sect!!!
long live super lazy sect!!!
long live super lazy sect!!!
long live super lazy sect!!!
The one and only Patriarch Onion. I have been a fan of yours since I was in high school about four years ago. I haven't read this version here, but I read both versions of this book over on Wattpad and all the other books you've written. And my personal favorite was definitely this one. If this is same as the ones over on Wattpad then it's definitely a book worth reading. One thing that stood out to me the most that I liked was the in-depth explanation of the techniques. And the background of the mc before rebirth is just Chief's kiss, great premise that was explained beautifully. But..*Sigh* I used to be really hooked on your books before, but sadly it's been a while since I've read any since I stopped using Wattpad. But asides from praising this amazing book, I wanted to say you were one of my biggest inspirations to start writing Patriarch Onion. All those times I spent hiding my phone in class to read your books are memories that I'll never forget. Thank you for writing your novels, seriously they hold a special place in my heart.
If you ever have the time I hope you'd take a look at one of my books, it's called "The Founder Of Qi, Cultivation."
Sincerely, your super, grandiose, mega large, biggest fan, Tseth(The Sage Equal To Heaven hehe)
It is still early days but this is a good but fairly cliche story so far. The most obvious issue is the desperate need of an editor. Not just for grammar/spelling assistance but also to help cut out unneeded duplication. For example, we don't need to see the character screen that many times when literally nothing has changed.
I really enjoyed this book! The story was very well written and kept me engaged the whole way through. I loved the characters and the mythical creatures. The world-building was excellent and I can't wait to read more about this hidden world. I highly recommend this book to anyone who loves fantasy novels. [img=update]
I'll be thick-skinned and comment my own novel to show my support for it and you can too haha. I am just an ordinary guy and not a writer by profession so please give justice if you see some grammatical error. I hope you will learn to like the story. I could not promise to release 4-7 updates every week. But i'll try if my time permits me.
I'm not a gamer so usually reading books about system and stuff don't make sense to me. overall the story is good and like the way it progresses
it's kind of sad story but I like it. I
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I Officially Love This Novel, Well Built Character, Little Plot Holes. Very Readable English and Exceedingly Interesting Plot.
What else does a man like me need, Please don't stop Author, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATTTEEE!
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