Iam new to Webnovel and this is my 1st webnovel that I ever read. And iam loving this.
Hi fellow author!I’ve really enjoyed seeing where you’ve taken this so far. Your story is absolutely captivating, and I’m eager to see what comes next. Seriously, don’t give up—I’m here to keep your spirits up! Not that you need it, but hey, good job! I’m loving every bit of it so far.Oh, and if you have a moment, could you check out my book? It’s a fantasy adventure titled Bellator: Rising. The story follows a hero’s journey in a world I’ve meticulously crafted from the ground up. You’ll discover a unique mana system, intriguing species, various countries, and rich cultures, each with their own religions and laws.This is my first book, and I’m genuinely eager to get some feedback. Whether you’re an experienced writer or just a fan of fantasy, your insights could really help me improve. I’m bracing myself for any critique, no matter how brutal, so let it rip! Your honest opinions would be invaluable.Thanks so much for considering giving it a read.Best,IkarisP.S. Your feedback would mean the world to me!
a good start .............................
Its a good book with good writing quality, stable updates, a good development of story, a very unique character design but the world background not so much but its too early to say though. Overall i'll say its a interesting story with its own unique style of writing and character.
its really hard to digest that a mature man in the body of a young man behaving like a spoiled brat. if there was no reincarnation then it would have somewhat clicked. hope u tone his mischievous character down a bit in the upcoming chapters.
nice .I am a person who discovers something interesting must try
Tbh I came by this book the first time and well it didn’t look like it had any potential ??but damn as I swung by the second time, the author was cooking completely, everything is detailed, the worldbuilding is well done, cliffhangers that’ll leave you gaping for more chaps ?and it deserves support so be a real reader and give some support to this man
The truth is that I read until chapter 58, the story doesn't bother me that it's slow, but I'm surprised that until this chapter they still haven't solved so many gaps or gaps in the previous chapters.I missed a lot more background and details in the first chapters, for example his early graduation or his relationship with secondary characters. I ignored some things to continue reading but I realized that this is a fic with nice words "to pass the time"
This book was recommended to me by a friend. And just reading 3 chapters, I'm highly captured by it. I hope the author updates frequently
"Are you serious Doc?"
Never!
We stoped on silent hearing a long explain from Mamat.