Hi, author! Are you alright? You've been out for a couple of days already. It's alright to rest. We understand that you also have your own private life. Just don't forget about your story and be on hiatus in the long run. Just take good care of yourself to keep your body and mind healthy.Btw, Advance Merry Christmas, author! Will you be able to dump chapters of the story as a way of Christmas present? heheWill be here to support you and the story of Ilas Krow 'til the end!
surprisingly this is actually pretty good.
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I think it's a really nice book I really like the introduction whe like the system voice speaks to her and talks to her about the game it's really interesting and all
Story should be tagged as a Slice of Life and nothing else. Any parts that involve cultivation or fantasy all feel forced. Author would rather talk about the nice places they go to eat.The update stability is also garbage. Stay away until they figure their sh*t out.
There are some suggestions tho, which I hope you take as a constructive criticism for your own improvement.You don't really need to be adamant in explaining the system but at least include some subtle hints or few information regarding it.The MC is great for developing so keep at it. I just hope you don't take his ruthlessness in later chapters. A cold dagger slices the hand that touches it. Don't go overboard in being conceited tho, a shadow may bask in the light but they stay firm relative in their position.The harem, i approve your building up too. Keep it not as rush, it relish the flavor. Character introduction should be firm and their encounter somewhat distinct than the others. In this your doing a good job. Nice building up Natalie, I like hardworking characters that although seen with shade of frost but within them a summer breeze.The world building could use some work. It is alright tho so I say slightly above average. Make people be absorbed in the explanation. Such as make some detailed overview to work the reader's imagination. The greatest working hand of the author is his reader's imagination so do experiment your own style in captivating that aspect. Of course you can't cater everyone so don't compromise the story for just about everyone.This is not because I don't like the story. It is good and interesting but I'll be frank that I'm not much sold. This is the highest I could give for now. I hope your growth would be outstanding.Current chapter: 128I'll be taking my leave then.
interesting let read and see how it goes, I've really never seen anyone try to integrate a western fantasy in eastern fantasy. yeah I've seen some put in clip scenes but they don't use the western skills so I'm exited to read this
I can only hope this one is different. The premise sounds very similar to "Scoring Sacred Body from the Get Go" that MC was extremely arrogant and manipulative.
a good hidden gem..........
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All of these chapters and weird things.....where to start?What is this?!This story was written as an entry for the 'Unassuming Protagonist' WPC contest, and I wanted to capture the raw energy and fun that the traditional shonen battle anime and manga gives me in webnovel form.I am always improving, and I hope it can be reflected in the story too. There is heavy anime and manga inspirations, but no copying or plagirism as I wanted each story arc to tell a slightly different story in this world.The power sets are defined ambiguously, like how it's usually done in anime. This CONTRASTS the traditional system novels, and I personally have preferred the ambiguity, leaving things up in the air for discussions and power scaling later on.Seasons?! And Volumes?!Think of reading this story like watching an anime or reading a manga, and each of the major story arcs are organized into various seasons. Each of the season tells a complete story, while leaving room for more to happen.So many Auxiliary Chapters!They are like the little scribble or author's note/thoughts, kinda like bonus chapters which gives supplementary information for the story.Does everybody read minds, or can I not use grammarly?!'Some say that the Brit speaks the true English, the language of the majesty herself.' "Aight if you wanna be wrong, and not be free, then so be it!"It really is a matter of differing conventions between the British English and American English. I was educated in the UK in the past six years, and this is what I am used to doing frankly. I hope this won't detract away from the reading experience itself though.
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