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Hey!
Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.
A very promising beginning, the writing is very nice. The female and male lead look lovely ans strong... I look forward the next chapters.
Okay so I believe that the story has potential. However, the first thing I noticed which I feel is incorrect is your title. Why not try changing the title to this instead: Man, Monster, or God? . I suggest this because your title has a punctuation error as the comma's and question marks clash. Also, try using Grammarly to check for grammatical and punctuation errors, that way your sentences will flow smoothly. Overall, keep up the good work.
Bad, when i read this, i feel like either the author isn't thinking much when he wrote his first chapters or he thinks readers are idiots. I've only read a few but the outlook of mc is quite bad.The item received from system is always something mc needs and he will get it no matter how low the auctioned item is, like his physique problem solved in a quite un-charistic fashion after hyping it unnecessarily
Most useles book I’ve read, the author gave the main character powerful talents like the chaos body but he’ s struggling to defeat a person 2 minor realms above him. It’s stupid
I read this about 1 year ago and I must day Im disappointed. Not because the novel is bad, no. In fact I would say its amazing for the novels on webnovel. What Im disappointed in are the insane grammar and spelling errors in the novel. If they were to be fixed, I would read this regularly. The novel also has some odd things with techniques. I still dont fully understand the cloning technique, even after reading 150ish chapters. Having an auxilary chapter to explain techniques like this would be useful, because I had to wonder what he could do and couldnt without any answers. Finally, cliches. The novel has MANY. But, they arent in your face telling you how cool it is to be supreme etc. Its mainly for plot and story, so the MC, the main focus of the story, doesnt suffer from the usual bs that comes with all the cliches. It has potential to be amazing, but holds itself back due to its details.
dude, shift this story into fanfic category. because using tag #anime####################################################################
thank you for work and good book....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Shamlessly rating my own works;)
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I really love it, although the grammar is a bit off but the clarity of the story can really be seen.
Wondered why disconnected wasn’t updating turns out this is the reason lol anyway this is getting a mandatory 5 stars coz of how good the first is if you disagree fight me 140