This story is honestly good so far, it's not perfect as no story is obviously, yet it's honestly good enough to compel you to read more.
The only down-side is it's really short so far, the length of the chapters make it feel a bit longer which I approved of, however it doesn't change the short amount of chapters so far. So all I can hope for is the chapter release schedule somehow picks up.
I love the fact the main character is by no means a pure innocent person. In fact he's surprisingly cruel, some might say what he did stretched beyond the borders of humane, they certainly did. I enjoyed it however. He's finally been granted the power to not hide his darkness within, per-say. So I'm excited to see how the story progresses.
Good luck with your story and I hope you don't drop it, keep it up Author-san. The Dao of the Psychopath harem master is strong in you.
Reading this felt like a weird theory that worked, dont ask me what that means as I do not know
This is my first novel so I'm extremely nervous mainly because English is not my native language.
I want to write every part of Zhen Han's life: from his birth to the moment he achieved everything he has desired. In his journey many characters would join him both good and bad.
The mysteries behind his birth would be slowly revealed so please be patient ^.^
I hope you like the chapters I wrote so far. If you're a new reader and not sure about this novel then please give the first two chapters a try ^^
Thank you.
needs more detail in his inventions he makes. you keep doing he Or she it's confusing. your charging coins for small chapters
Now, when I started reading this novel, I tried so hard not to complain. It's just feels so rushed. Like the first 5 chaps are like wh-what so he dea- but now he's in the hospi- and eait hes killing people no- and it's yyyyyy. But cough cough, here's how I feel on the novel. MC : it's a better then average MC, like 4 star range. World backgrounds average, but it'd a bit early to say that. But as I know my back, I know NOTHING interesting, or well explained. (Maybe thats my fault as I was confused for info dumps.) STORY : Is again but still to early for reader to get thr juicy bits.
And thats a very bad and basic review of mine. (Probably the former)
So all I'll say untill a 100 chaps later is, slow down and explain ur stuff, add ways to show the viewers transitions, or just dont make ne miss somebody dead in a line. I look foward to what Mr.Author will bring.
Emica did a fantastic job with this story. It is a true honor to get to know her and work with her. Brother is a wonderful debut book and I hope for all the best for your future works! [img=recommend]
Author here! Another shameless review ;)
Hopefully I can live up to my own set of high expectations. I would love to write more and will continue to work on this novel arduously.
I also have another novel that I will be posting updates for on my Pateorn account. It is about half way done.
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A great read, captured my attention from the first chapter and i just couldn’t stop reading
This is a wonderful novel that i would recommend to anyone
I love the concept of the novel
I have read some chapters, and this story is great, the mc and the idea is just perfect. Keep going because this book has potential I do have some suggestions, since there is some flaws.
IT WAS A GREAT STORY,BUT SOMETIMES EREN IS NOT HIMSELF
It's a very good book the only thing that I would like is that it updates more often.
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