Every story you write is just a unique experience. It seems like you have such a magical pen at your home, huh? You presented your ideas and thoughts really well on the paper. I appreciate your talent. I wish I could write anything close to that. That’s too good!
I am really impressed with your writing style. Keep it up! :)
Your genders are frequently confused, disturbing the flow and wrecking my enjoyment. Otherwise, very interesting...
I don't have any other relevant observations to share!
The story is fascinating and the fact that it is the author's first system story, the author did a pretty good and I enjoyed reading the book. Will be looking forward to more from you.
This is an amazing book, at 1st i was skeptical because most books with high ratings on webnovel aren't that good but this novel deserves it rating and more. My only regret is that I didn't begin reading this book sooner.
The writing is better than the first part which says that author(Haji
its lack luster.. if you don't have anything to read then try otherwise not worth it.. there are many more novels with similar setting who have done a far better job than this
Some part of the content seems to be.. plagiarized from some other novel (the part about policewoman and dead driver)?Other than that, it seems to be a harem. And it develops very unnaturally at that. He met a policewoman who didn't seem like an easy pick. When she invited him to be her training coach to a gym, they only started & acted as friends. 5 chapters later they kiss and she says stuff like she'll do whatever he decides and that she's on his side and he suddenly acts as if it's already his decided wife. Like.. what the, where's the development? The girls in the other world are also EASY: first meetings and their cheeks are already red, they admire him, fall in love and would probably have nothing against being banged by MC. Oh and by the way, his only company in the other world are so far 3 girls and 0 boys. There is that male servant, a senior brother, a master, or that beggar who disappeared, but they don't accompany him in his daily life. Other guys are portraited as enemies- be it pig demon or some h*rny bullies.At least it's not a world of zombie apocalypse he's switching to, to build his harem and b*ng women he saved left and right which is the case for other novels in this genre (e.g. "I Have a Mansion in a Post-Apocalyptic World"). But in my opinion it's only slightly better, mostly due to absence of s*x, r*pe and rac*sm (am at chapter 66). But author often mentions how big of a beauty some girl is, her eyes, her face, her figure, her clothes. That's a red flag... As for harem, it's pretty much 1 woman in real world, 2 women in other world, that's 3 for now. Another brothel girl randomly inviting him to give him happiness, plus some other random, side chicks that would want him to be their boyfriend.
I'll write this review just because i think this novel would be good but the way this novel is written is so weird.. the novel is in 1st person all the time like mc is narrating the story.. this is not how it's supposed to be.. most parts should be in 3rd person.. only thinking and talking should be in 1st person
utter trash novel....
please consider beforehand if you want to lose IQ very fast or not:
-MC with blessing from god of dumbness
-appearance from typical arrogant and cocky "arch"-enemies
-forced mainstream plot
-dragon power that literally every MC has
-constant trash talk from every character in the novel + no real story advancement
I'm loving this novel Is truly a fun story but the update is killing me but whatever authors have a life too so I shouldn't get too greedy.
Please can we get day updates even if you go premium of 5 coin per chapter will still read updates..........................................
I don't know if this is good or not but the writing quality is good! I realize it's a short novel 900 chapters. I don't know how good this novel is or how far it'll go. But if you're in it purely for the ??????. You will definitely enjoy this!