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Best novel ive read come from trial reads in a bit. Lately the translation quality has been so bad I can’t even finish most 40 chapters.
The MC makes smart choices and isnt just bek g trash woth a system. i really hope this gets chosen
Cultivation is non existent. Everyone wants to kill you on sight. The Detective’s intuition is so supernatural that the author doesn’t need evidence. The 2 girls are annoying.
Honestly dont try to do more than what you can handle author. Stick with the power fantasy sect building and it would have been better than what this is.
so I'm not much of a reviewer I've maybe done 2 other reviews, I don't got much to say it's great so far the best story I have found in the cultivation genre and almost the best I've found in general. I like this one a lot more though I've decided to dedicate my power stones to this and so should you it's worth it, so much so that I doubt you can find a proper reason not to.
Five star just for the pokemon art on your author page!!!
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I love this, a great pick finally after loads of garbage. i hope this gets picked and webnovel doesnt scam us all again, Please check this out
trash after chapter 170 his sect got destroyed and he made a new sect and it became all about the sect and him refining something and every one got awed everytime
Starting this review, I can say the book has potential if nothing else. The author is aiming for something unique, despite tackling one of the most troublesome genres to make unique IMO (The video game genre). I love how diverse classes and sub-classes are. It proves that there's room for a great World Building which is a good sign.
Synopsis: I came to learn that a long synopsis isn't the way to go unless you add some real flavor and spice to it. Not to say your synopsis is bad, just that the cold reality is that a lot of people seem to skip the synopses or skim through them unless there's something present to grab their attention. Would recommend maybe cutting the synopsis a little or adding something to make it more worthwhile.
Story Development: I gave this 5 stars. The author seems to have everything planned out which makes the story more enjoyable and gives it direction.
Writing quality: Gave this a 4. In terms of grammar, kudos to the author. Pretty good and far from unreadable which many will appreciate. However, I took away a star for one reason and that's vocabulary. While the grammar is good, there are a lot of unnecessary words or phrases that could be made shorter with the use of more concise words that get to the point. I pointed out an example in just the second sentence of the first chapter. There are quite a few instances where shorter sentences could be made in both narration and dialogue.
Character Design: Honestly, I don't usually mark this but I decided to make this the first book I actually marked it (sorry lol. Decided that if the author describes their character then I'll grade how well it was done). I gave this a four. Simply because the descriptions were kinda plain. I'm probably nit-picking but I like when descriptions bring flair and pizazz to the writing quality. Terms like "Blue eyes, short blonde hair" could use additional flavor. Like "Gorgeous Blue eyes that reflected the color of the sky". I love stuff like that. You can keep it the way you want though. I'm just nit-picking as mentioned before.
Updating Stability: Judging from your weekly chapters, I see 0 chapters per week. Not sure what's up with that but gave it 5 anyway. You might have irl issues that prevent you from updating constantly.
World Background: Gave this a 5. Done well IMO. I could nit-pick this too but I'll let it slide because that would be too harsh. You detailed the World the characters are in pretty well. Good job author!
Finally, I must say this book has potential. Readers, if you're looking for something interesting, take a look at this one. Positive you have at least an 80% chance of enjoying. Overall 4.6. Keep up the good work author!
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Ah. Every week I anticipate whether or not this book will FINALLY leave the voting pool.
Voting pool is lasting too long this time, isn’t it? So many other books have been removed already but there hasn’t been any new ones continued in a while.
This book is written beautifully. The writer did a great job and I can't wait to continue reading. Keep up the good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The plot is great MC got reincarnated where his father loved him and got married to a nice girl but feels sad for the girl for her family sold her for 100 gold teals. MC loves the girl very much he shows that I spite of being a crippled he shower the loves she need as the wife of a man. The girl Zhang Xiu he saved he should first cured of the demand cultivation and the face since she deserved it. He should helped her in getting revenge and make her his second wife as he deserved of the person she is.