the story was going good for me until the 70s. had a great pace for me maybe even a little to fast, then we get stuck in a 10+ chapter long "spar". it killed to mood of the story for me. the author definitely slammed on the brakes a little to hard here.
Your novel is an incredible masterpiece! The world-building is immersive, and the characters are deeply crafted, each with their own unique complexities. The way you weave the plot is captivating, with unexpected twists that keep the reader on the edge of their seat. The pacing is perfectly balanced, keeping the tension high without feeling rushed. The language you use is eloquent yet accessible, drawing the reader into the story effortlessly. The themes explored are thought-provoking, adding layers of depth that elevate the overall experience. Without a doubt, this is a story that will resonate long after the final page.”
It's a very interesting story with intriguing characters, specially Asil
Good book loved the story development as well as writing quality
Without NTR MC getting cuck, this book will be the best golden treasure with wholesome harem.... sigh... pity...pity....
The novel give off a mysterious vibe, I like the trio, hmm and I can't wait to find out more about Elijah's family
I love the start, i can't for the start of the normal chapters. This is the beginning but I highly recommend this book. Continue climbing high Author.
I like the story......................
I thoroughly enjoyed this, I hope you release more soon. The world building is very fascinating. The characters have depth, even if I've only read five chapters.
You drop troll?
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Loving this series. Really hope that we can have more chapters being released daily but I know it is easier said than done. So I'll just wait as long as author could give his best for each chapter.