Any news on the release schedule in the future? Noticed it's been a few weeks since the last chappy. Great story, so interested in hearing about the future of this story.
Amazing story so far, I hope you update soon because I really like the idea of a military system. How will the MC develop will there romance, drama or character deaths?
You have a potentially good story. I would suggest you write a bit of world-building because I am confused about the setting of the story. is it in China or somewhere else? I would like to see descriptions of places and characters. I also would advise you to look up how to write in the active tone of voice instead of passive. this story has some grammar issues. other than that keep up the good work.
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Was this story dropped? If it is, then that was really sad I am reading all the eternal series by author I'm done with the first two..hope this will continue
sick characters ,brilliant world building that is nicely spread and not all info dumped at once and good mc.also fig the magic and abilities
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Ukraine : "Vladimir- Kun please be gentle ".Vladimir-kun : "sorry Ukraine-chan ,I can't hold back anymore" .*squirts the entire 2nd Guards Motor Rifle Division into Kyev *
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Amazing. I love the story so much, the characters have greatly justified and I....I don't know what to say but I really hope that the novel goes long.Keep up the good work. we are eagerly waiting for the next chapters...
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I have read all the chapters and i must say this is one of the best books i have read and i have been reading for a long tim evan if its not your story and it is to get recognized it deservers five stars