This one has potential! Although it's a bit slow at the beginning, the story totally flips after the revelation. It's a novel worth reading.
Good article, it teaches well about writing in Web novel, this helped me a lot to become a writer so I give it a hige five. I vividly recommend this book since it's informative and important, the writer did a very good job
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As the author mentioned, the book is similar to the holy grail of novels 'reverend Insanity' world-building, and the author's method to set the stage is simply fantastic. The update stability is perfect, from beginning to current there has always been 1 chapter a day except for 1 or 2 rare instances, writing quality is up to a very high standard as well, overall its a really good book and it has potential to be even better as the author gather's experience, would definitely suggest a read, keep up the good work author!
Chapters are way too short even when there’s a warning for it. Feels way too rushed since chapters are so short, every six to seven chapter combined I’d say is equal too around 1500-1800 words.
Its good so far but it kinda sucks that Mas(the MC) is completely reliant on the system and doesn't even try to learn alchemy properly. What if the sytem goes offline in the future during a time where he urgently needs it? Plus since the process happens in an instant inside the system if he ever takes on a disiple its not like he could show or guide them through the process of creating something. The only thing he could do is rely on the system to provide a recipe and show off the final product.
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its a shame that you dropped this "sigh"
what a shame
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Hey lol I have no plans to read this. Honestly I just saw the cover and wanted to say the person looks like he got rejected from art school. Anyways that was my piece. So long ? Dropped a sneaky 5 star review cause I’m just too nice :)
If you could have a zombie apocalypse with some realism, this fiction goes into detail.
There are the tiny errors in grammar, like using “on” when it should be “in.” If you tell the author, they will fix it, so it’s like it never existed.
The update is high, and with consistent quality.
The story revolves around base-building and character interactions. It works well with the vivid details.
That said, the characters aren’t the usual cardboard. The world keeps moving, even when the MC is doing something. He actually gets help and lets others do work because he is human, not the Godly know-it-all, despite his photographic memory. There are a few beauties popping up in his group, but it is forgivable, since they aren’t the usual annoying cast that want to hop on the MC, but can’t say it. They’re people.
The world is propped up with culinary tips, banter about gun handling, and so on. The depth is enough to be real without being a textbook.
It’s great. I don’t know why there aren’t as many Power Stones, gifts, and reviews as I expected. Maybe we all went broke or forgot?