i'm the author. hopefully everyone can enjoy my story. feel free to give feedback.
Wow... a truly spoiled and shameless mc... it matches well with the author... bwahahahahahahHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love your story i hope you bring it back soon
love the character's idea of being an outside observer while also not letting himself be the super weak side character
Personally I like the story so far although I need more chapters to judge I think you need to describe at least the appearance mc and supportive characters keep up the good work
This is one of the best SC-FI interstellar etc novel's out there I find nothing to complain about besides too few chapters but to be fair even if there was more then a 1000 I would still want more 10/10 would recommend
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Not my type of story but it's quite interesting. The writing seemed a bit hard to read. This story is new to me. Anyone who likes new concepts, it's a must read.
Hello there, have you ever read a system story? Have you ever look how amazing a monk is? Have you ever think bowl of rice is more than enough for you? Come here!!! Let's learn how amazing Fang Abbot.
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I never have enough a good novel like this. Make me remember about "A Gourmet in Another World". They have similar lay out, but the different is this novel will talk about monk and monastery in china. The view will make us understand how hard to become a monk, that always smile even the one view u as enemy. Every chapter make you smile and angry when learn how difficult life is.
This story seems really god the man character is interesting (although did you mean for him to seem so sociopathic in the early chapters? I mean he says hes okay with being an npc because he was getting bored) but more than that, please god run the early chapters through grammerly or a read-to-text or something cause this story is great but my god i actually can’t understand what you mean in some of the paragraphs without like 10 careful rereads
Hello，
This is Avarohm Leslie, a representative editor from another platform which focuses on adventurous and high concept genres. I really think your story is intriguing with unique appeal to readers. Sincerely hope that we can have a chance to discuss further cooperation with you. If you are interested, please reach out to me at [email protected]. Looking forward to introduce more to you. Thanks.
Its really good. I honestly think it's better than reincarnation of a living god.
The MC is well thought out and his mind works just like you would think a demon would.
This is my initial review to show my support for the author until the story is completed. Keep up the great work, and may you see the rightful end with a renewed soul and purpose in life. You rock!
Also, please study the art of spacing. It will improve your storytelling a lot!
I'm hoping you could also help me with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged) by dropping an initial review. Cheers!