Hoping that the author could see this. Im truly amazed on how the author used certain rare words here and I enjoyed the story line a bit. Though the chapters are quite not up to date for the most part but I believe if this book were to be given enough time accumulating chapters after chapters, it will surely attain the recognition it deserves. I hope the author wont forget about the system in the near future chapters.
Do someone know raw name this novel? cause this translation is not different than mtl... . ... ........ ....... . Jxjsbshwksbjdkjebdjeekeh
okay. i love this story. i hope author never dropped this book halfway, or i will be very mad. such a nice, vividly depicted and thrilling action-like story. what can i say. i do love this one. thank's for a great masterpiece from you, author. good work.
I like it, however I don’t like how he’s coerced into doing things for the big clans.
this is just too bloody lazy to be called a novel.
it's like shoveling things inside a burrito and hoping it will taste okay.
it's like he's trying to write marvel insipired novel and fail in the worst way possible.
not worth the effort truly.
It has been a few weeks since I liked a story premise well enough to write a review. This book has pretty good grammar and the sentences read well. It never messes up the genders. But the X and repeating same X where they need a different synonym or deleting the 'and X' is still a problem. Skill/Spell names have horrible inconsistency. Most of my 2 Star deduction is due to this. Also, a few too many tropes like 'pouring the whole bottle of pills' are here. This particular trope bugs me a lot. Respect the Pills!
translation quality is good, the premises is good but the concept of Tri gu sect rule is not gonna work. Even in demonic sect that kind of rule only make their demise faster (unless the sect leader have golden finger). I know the author wanted to use the concept of raising Gu in a pot as sect rule but it just not gonna work with human. Ok say that the higher up did not care about outer disciples at all, that inner disciples can send their people to plunder the sect resources like meat Gu food and than when the Quota is not reached the higher up will punish all the outer disciples(idk maybe kill them and take they Gu to eat or something) that is pure stupidity. Say that if they do that, than sect outer disciples will become less and inturn make the new inner disciple lesser, this will cause a gap in their sect generation compare to other a lil smart(not a lot just a lil bit smart) that have rule slightly good rule to prevent their sect resources go to other place(I.e sell to outside market to fill some people pockets), the said Tri-Gu sect gonna suffer a great lost if their sect enter a war with other sect because of generations gap. That still did not count when they Sect fight with Gu nemesis(phoenix,fire type cultivator) as I remember the author keep saying this is dog eat dog kind of world, it will make more so for other sect to target Tri-Gu sect. That if, if the author care about logic at all. But if He(or she) did not, than... just ignore all my comments above☝
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One of the best of the current batch, something rare nowadays in webnovel....
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I like it. It's pretty similar to The Novel's Extra and The Author's POV. Anyone who's read either can pretty much predict where the story is going to go, which isn't necessarily bad. I can't really say much when it comes to the world and characters because the novel is newer and there aren't a lot of chapters. Character development is really what makes these kinds of stories stand out from the rest; when storylines are similar, it's the characters that determine if the novel is good or bad. Both the world and the characters have room to grow.
What really hurts this is the grammar. It's legible, and that's about it. Most of the people on Webnovel probably aren't real strict about grammar, but it's also clear where good grammar is what determines which novels people keep reading and which ones are dropped. A few things I'd like to point out:
Run each chapter through Grammarly. The free version works very well. It's a great way to improve grammar.
Periods go inside of quotes. I noticed this a lot in Ch. 17. It should be: "Blah blah blah." instead of "blah blah blah". The same rule is true for commas.
A lot of the sentences are broken; it feels like words are missing.
Finally, use commas. I see a lack of commas in a lot of novels. It's more of an experience thing, deciding where to place them, but reading well-written works helps with figuring out where to place them. I was taught to read each sentence out loud, and to put a comma where I naturally paused.
Overall though, it's a good story with potential, worth a try if you like this kind of novel.
there are way too few reviews even after all this time? idk something seems a little bit sus in here
struggled to make it through the first chapter. this story needs alot of work and needs a over haul on both characters and world view building and development.