Thank you for the update, loved the story development and character setting so far. And maybe in the future, the adeptus mechanicus will create the skiitari rangers, castelan robots, and skorpius disentigrator tanks to help fight against the arachnids' faction!!!!. I can also imagine the reactions from the terran federation towards the imperial guard and the adeptus mechanicus (tech-priests).
If you came here after TOS expecting the same thing u will be sadly disappointed. Why u might ask? Let me explain after reading the first 15 chapters. The Mc has no defining goal he's simply going with the flow. He's born in a position of disadvantage yet seems to not fully develop his powers nor try to escape his disposition. The author also mentions these power he has but seems not to actively utilize them. The Mc feels so small in this story simply because the world is so developed and they are so far behind in power and technology. More to add but im lazy and also waiting to see wt happens next.
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interessante story, Mc devepment and background development are i gaging
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This novel is amazing. It should definitely be picked. I have read a lot of novels throughout the years and I can say this with complete assurance it is one of the few masterpieces. it is filled with action and comedy, adventure and great world building, everything seems to real and fantastic at the same time...
I would strongly recommend this novel to both a new reader and a veteran!!!!
I haven’t read this book but from the synopsis there’s the early problem of making him exceptional yet still have time to do fun stuff. Alot novels try to humanize cut throat ppl which i find wierd when most cut throat ppl are putting in effort to make sure whats been built stays stable rather then spending time on actual hobbies.
Pretty interesting and a fun read overall. Author occasionally breaks the fourth wall. MC has an OP cheat and uses it to make money. Thankfully doesn't seem like there's going to be a harem, not sure if there's a romance tag at all actually.
A really trashy novel, dont bother reading it. So little is explained of the MC, his System, or the world in general. The whole thing reads like the author is just spewing out random plot and the readers are supposed to just know what he was thinking at the time. It's atrocious.
In regards to the MC, he comes across as an actual MMO character. As in, someone logged into a random MMO then without care for the story, plot, or quests, just ran about killing things and showing off like they're a boss.
I'm really excited about the way this story is unfolding, especially in chapters 80-92. Can't wait to read more! I realize that you're just getting started with this project so try not to overwork yourself :)
I adored this story this world these characters. I wish it would never end.