I’m really enjoying this novel! As others have said, this is very similar to the authors other novel however that doesn’t take away from how good this story is. The progression so far has been great and I really hope this novel is picked up to continue
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This is a lovely story! Well written and well developed! I enjoy how the characters develope in the story too. Keep up the good work!
- Dani boi
Hey erosire are you back from your hiatus ? If you are so when are you going to continue your stopped stories. Well, I haven't read it yet but if you are the I am damn sure this story is going to good I have confidence in you man.
I was pretty shaken up by that first chapter, which was pretty ruthless and brutal but it introduced the story's personality, which was bloody and not for the weak-minded. I like that there's good writing quality and character design. The detail and hook really brought me in and were quite amazing! The potential I see in this novel is high and I can foresee that it will be a fantastic, one-of-a-kind story.
It's such a great book, the writing quality Is so amazed,maybe this book is my first title in my book list,sure,why. not right?that's all thank you
Awesome i lovE it
The synopsis is super awesome and catchy. Going into another world which is completely different is a awesome story. The writer has also done a great job in writing the background making it more interesting.
the pilot is good and it's promising story. will look forward to more of the story. The opening was different considering some. i think the story will have good oncoming chapters
WRITING QUALITY:-A commen phenomenon with Original Authors sadly is poor writing quality, however this guy is an execption. The use of punctuation, paragraphs of reasonable length meaning not too long or short, and overall a readable flow which is what we readers expect. Why shouldnt we if were investing our time into a story? A story that will take us on a rollar coaster of emotions. 5/5STABILITY OF UPDATES:Since Ive binged this novel up to current chapter... I don;t have a full pciture to comment on. What I do appreciate though is a novel past 200 chapters still going strong. Several OAs ive been reading have fallen of the wagon out of knowhere sadly. Thankfully this guy is not one of them (fingers crossed) 5/5STORY DEVELOPMENT:The Story mentions that there current world is just small part of a ever larger universe. This is to be assumed and people at this point shouldn't be suprised. Putting that aside we have enough story to understand the situation while leaving some mystery which I feel is necessary. Also the author has put a timetable out for the MC to reach a certain cultivation level so it wont be dragged on in ths same place. Enough Urgency to move everything forward 5/5CHARACTER DESIGN:This is by far one of my favirote novels in this regard. Iv'e read enough old authors and new original authors to see well done characters.MC - Man who started off on the extreme side of benevolence only to get betrayed. So one can expect him to pendlum swing the other way, however he dosen't stay there long after his first 2 women heal some of his emotional wounds and give him some faith in humans again. With his companion Luna also forcing him to face some of his repeating traumatic patterns that do more harm then good to those around him and more importantly himself. Great stuff. 5/5Harem Members - The 1st one has been shown to have a rough history while manging to keep her optimistic view on life in contrast to the MC (I know he was dealth a worse hands, but I still think this point has merit). Her power is strong enough to stick with the MC for the long run. Good Stuff. Dont need a weak lover in the cultivation world2nd women while some may view her as too agreeable with the MC I like her overall. Growing up alone with no connection.. to finding the MC and not wanting to let go developing a possesive attitude border line Yandere.. to slowley understanding the way people interact all makes sense. Is it emotionally healthy? No, but how could it be given the world and her experiences.Others:Several potentail allies have been shown. Too early to say if they'll stick with the MC or not given the current plot. Still well thoughout charcters from the looks of it so far.WORLD BACKGROUND:This novel despite being over 250+ chapters in is still very mysterious. Multiple demensions if you zoom out to the max. While the current land mass may or may not be the only one. I wanted to give this a 4/5, however I understand its still too early to know such information so I'll give it a 5/5 in hopes clarity will happen soon. OVERALL:Worth the read. Truly. Cultviation stucture is easy to understand, charcters have depth and are develpoing. Story is progressing at a resonable pace. 5/5
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