Good idea, but very bad reading format and not so good translation. The world background is good and good potential for story development . H
I cant really offer anything much of criticism as of yet. The story starts out with the MC getting a weak pet cat as a contract beast who needs to be able to fight with ferocious monsters. He gains a nurturing system that allows him to progress the contract beast's state as long as the MC does things that make it happy. He can upgrade the quality of the bloodline as well as it's level progression. He is also able to increase other aspects of his beast.
To start off his little cat is female, so based on the title I was actually expecting it to quickly gain human form. From what I have read so far it requires some nurturing. Also even before gaining human form the cat has some human attributes, such as jealousy and affection. The cat always wants to sleep in his bed with him. This should not be a problem, but it looks like in CH20 it gains a loli-human form. This could pose a problem with many of the readers here. I will update my review based on further reading.
As of now I enjoyed the content and found it to not be displeasing from the storytelling standpoint. It seems to be better written then many similar stories, though the system design and progression seems to be a bit weak.
did the author drop this one too?
Haven't read a single chapter yet but I'm excited for this novel hopefully it isn't harem and the villain a dumb potato :(, last I hope plot won't repeat itself like the rest of the cultivation novels :), thank you very much I like this novel...
Ok so lets me make brief summary of the first 3 chs. first of all he is a genius of a clan and belongs to a branch clan so yada yada bulshit and more he gets framed by his sister for r*pe and crippled and exiled hmmmm typical revenge plot passable but dont reading here after that he plots revenge and on the day of wedding he plants explosives everywhere and after some drama and bullshit bam there dead...ok. Now he finds himself on the yellow springs road well surrounded by alot of other souls cursing him because of what he did since some of them were innocent bystanders he laughs it off by some hypocritical reply and amongst the souls he finds the little sister and he runs toward her to taunt her but we see what shes extremely guilty since then and having nightmares and our legendary MCs hatred filled eyes turn TENDER his eyes are filled with TENDERNESS WTF IS WRONG WITH THE AUTHOR ARE U DRUNK OR SOMETHING ok fine there dead and sure who holds grudges in death its fine right? u thought it stops here? nope he gets excited and starts yelling how he wants be her big brother in next life and take care of her she gets hapoy and starts leaving after a minute he panics and starts running after her in hope of being reincarnated with her but he ccant ove fast or something so he does what ..... STARTS SPINNING LIKE AND ELECTRIC DRILL and souls around him are getting destroyed like wtf author are u high or something
spoiler
yup the sisters gonna reincarnate too welp u good souls out there with hero syndrome or extremely cheerful mc likers might enjoy this shit . but well im not telling u to stop reading tthats or u to decide what to do . welp adios fellas hope i can find some mc who wont regret taking revenge or something like that.. sigh and here i thought i would get a good one.
I have never seen an author suck his mc so much, each gesture, each movement, each breath,
the author adds how majestic are mc, how shocking it is, how extraordinary it is, that everything becomes illegible, with each gesture in a fight, the author adds 2/3 paragraphs of sucking from mc, he launches an attack?boom 3 paragraph of sucking from mc, a dodge? boom 3 mc sucking paragraph.
it's just unreadable.
I think this story is something that many would enjoy. Action packed with loads of information right off the bat. Me personally i prefer the show don't tell standard and having mystery and things revealed over time. I think if you don't and simply want a straight forward narrative this is definitely the story.
To me the weakest part is the combat scenes sometimes the timing is slightly off, this is typically due to the wording sometimes being past tense then referring to actions that should have already happened ex. saying a character dashed forward with an attack, then in the next line saying he grabbed his sword and dashed forward, that time of thing.
All in all I could see many people enjoying this novel, so keep it up author.
u still there...? this novel is good...
welp cant really force you to make more
chapters... imma wait ⊙▽⊙ O(∩_∩)O
A hidden gem, a genius teenager and an average man that was trained to be a badass and lived his life serving his country as an agent, fused together to become an even bigger badass.
He wants to be known by his knowledge and intelligence but his life started to revolve around showbiz.
He doesn't have a system nor cheat that would help him be famous straight up (i.e given acting skills / singing skills), he also didn't go back in time to steal other's works. But with the fused genius and badass agent's abilities, he could push through any obstacles.
This is very much worthy of 5 star imo, but I'll leave it with 4.5, there are minor spelling mistakes or mistakenly using homonyms, but that could be easily fixed by simple editing.
The author also did great by staying away from most clichés. It stays unique. And you wouldn't be grinding your teeth from reading almost the same sh*t over and over despite reading different books.
It's the wrong world, but I guess I can make an auction house.
Yeah, the auction house thing is kind of recent, but it looks like to be a serious endeavour by the MC, so it won't be a spoiler.
Izo Lee and classmates are summoned heroes, but the Chosen Hero and the goddess that summoned them chose to indulge themselves in pink-colored paradise. It is unclear if the rest of the classmates are dead when Izo cursed and was cursed in return by the goddess, but there had been some casualties at least. By the time she won against the Demon King, Izo was fighting alone, but later chapters mentioned her still having classmates after being cursed.
Anyway, chracters are lively, plot is kind of interesting albeit there are some holes that might need revisiting or might be Chekov traps, world can be expanded more, but chapters feel too short.
With only two chapters, I really can't tell that much yet, but the beginning is intriguing enough to anticipate more for the upcoming chapters. ,author has good writing skills, keep it up.
So far I think this is very well written and I believe that I will be reading more of it as soon as more chapters are released.
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