I would love if the author will continue to release more chapters in this book because so far the storyline has been great and I will love to see how far it goes
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I think you have a good book going here, the character is decently op, he's got a relatable backstory and the setting is just right. The fighting is pretty intense, I can tell you have a love of martial arts from it. I'd say you gotta keep writing, however, you gotta pace the story, make it flow with the reader, and work on the book's grammar, otherwise, you have got a great story!
lol good novel?????pretty decent... I like it ???????????????????????????????????????????????
The novel is ok but from what I have read ok is all it is unless they do something big before chapter 40 I can’t see how it would be picked
I love the story because from world background to character design even story development everything is unique author create everything himself that why I like this story
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King Vegeta was scared of baby broly with 10,000 bp and when he finds this mc with 320k bp and he wants to control her? garbage plot.
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Then instead of you know using brain and finding a way to stop it, MC screams at Vegeta that mc will kill him. Yeah it seems that a 3 year old attempted to write this fic because ever action that was taken was not even planned out.
I was laughing too hard that my stomach was hurting. This novel has a hilarious, fresh and enjoyable. The first 3 chapter seems a bit cliche, Getting a system, transport to another Continent that let you cultivate. Except that everything was very fun, there's no force plot like he suddenly comprehend some heaven defying technique, or some ultra jenius suddenly feel offend and want to bully the MC. Everything was fresh! The Author really bring a Fresh breath to the now toxic world full of cliche Cultivation novel. The system the MC got was a troll, I don't want to spoil anything but presently the system hasn't been fully explored by MC because of his Low Cultivation Base. This is the first review I write and English was not my First Language so have a mercy on me.
I sincerely request to please immediately upload the all chapters immediately if possible please immediately upload chapters from chapter 290. This novel is awesome. I don't care about others opinions but regarding my view this novel is awesome.
Rated low simply for grammar and first person writing. I did this and I did that do not make for an interesting story to read. I struggled to read even the first page
Story and character development is going in good direction and hopes if goes on like that. Harem member are also good and hope they get enough screen time unlike other novel where they get separated for 200 to 300 chapters.