Alright since the novel will hit 100 chapters soon, this is a good time to clear up some things for new readers.
Firstly the romance bit of this story doesn't start until a very long time, hell even in the current chapters ( Chapter 98 right now ) it still hasn't started. I didn't want the story to revolve around the romance until at least the end of the prologue arcs, because yes the first four arcs are really just prologue arcs. A lot of things happened but it's not the actual story yet. I know 100 chapters of prologue seems long, but stuff do happen so it's not like 100 chapters of just nothing. It's 100 chapters of worldbuilding, characters presentation and a bit of developpement. I think many will consider that the true story already started, but I am being hard with my own story and consider that the four first arcs are really bad compared to what is coming.
Also I wanted to, as I already said, clear some things up. The MC is not a good person overall, he may seem like one but he really ain't. Imagine as a villain who still has a heart and didn't lose all of his humanity. Also the MC is not the only important character in this story, it focuses on a lot of other characters and everyone who is named in the story can become immensely important later on.
To finish this I'll say that if you're looking for a basic cultivation story, don't read this. I don't know what my readers think of it, but I personally feel like my novel doesn't have a great cultivation part and only takes some ideas from other eastern fantasy novels. the cultivation part to me is bad, the other parts should be good. But if you want face slapping young masters, hiding your power to shock everyone repeatedly and long paragraphs to describe how the mc is cultivating...This ain't the good place.
Name: 我有亿张召唤卷
Author: 七夜回春 Lv. 3
Words: 750 thousand
Chapters: 227 (completed)
It’s a short novel, so assuming that it gets picked and assuming that there’ll be 14 releases every week, then it should be finished in about 4 months.
Well, our MC is a half-elf, and has been transmigrated. The biggest turn off is the huge info dumps at the start of the story. It does seem promising, but I just wasn't able to continue past chapter 20. However if warcraft is your thing go for it.
LORD OF ENIGMA AND UBUME BIRD WAS NOT PICKED!
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Amazing novel ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️. You can give it a try, I'm sure it will satisfy any virtual world lover. The starting is rather sad but romantic
Great writing skills! You have a great flow and ngl your story writing skills feels enigmatic and SO SO intriguing that it's almost impossible to stop reading. Definitely a page turner. I was intrigued by your short stories and I really love your themes and ideas for them. Keep up the good work!
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love the book seems very interesting as to where i am and just one small little complaint please upload faster?
but keep up the good quality seems very interesting
I can't say much here, but if you read the sypnosis, you should know about the story, it might not be as exciting as you thought of it and I apologize for that, I truly lack of experience
Anyway, enjoy my novel!
Until now this is a good read. The story is well structured, the character/story development is also not too fast and it has constant updates. Not much is explained about the world until now and sometimes it‘s hard to follow since the grammar is somehow lacking a bit. The most mistakes you will see in this book will be vocabulary ones where an article or a verb is wrongly used.
All in all it has great potential and the only thing which could make the story better is a editor/proofreader to reread and correct the spelling and grammar mistakes.
Author-san-special-five-star-review!!! 1st version!
I want to say it’s the first and only version, but knowing me, I’m prob gonna have to change this one day or another.
Anyhow, let’s get to the review.
STORY DEVELOPMENT – Tone
Okay, this time it’s really gonna be a grim-dark story. I know I said the same last time and it turned out to be a feel-good slice-of-life, but trust me, alright. Just read like, the first 2 chaps and you’ll see it.
Obviously, it’s not gonna be all gloom and depression. Slice-of-life will happen (since I love it), there will be comedy, romance, action, adventure, and all that good stuff.
One more thing I wanna add here is the mysteriousness of the novel. I know it sounds kinda pretentious coming from me, calling my novel mysterious and all, but what I mean is just that I’ll try my best to withhold certain info from the readers.
The reason for this is that I ****ed up a lot on SotNeW, by explaining every detail of the story as they appeared. Not cool.
STORY DEVELOPMENT – Pacing.
Things will happen faster this time around. Last time, whenever I wrote a scene, almost always, I would stick it into the story without deleting it (even though they were completely filler), but I’ll do it this time. Scenes will die, since I’m gonna have a proper stockpile this time around.
And also, Author-san ascended, and like, learned how to skip useless parts in scenes. Very epic.
STORY DEVELOPMENT – Side Stories.
Different POVs and other stories will appear more. I’ll just say that. Also, depending on stuff, I might rewrite previously written scenes in the POV of a different character. I’ll try to make this clearer as we go about the story.
Also, remastered Layla story incoming, pog. And yes, I’ll take a part from that and chuck it into the synopsis. He-he-he.
CHARACTERS – MC
MC will have an interesting character arc this time around, how about that?
CHARACTERS – Side charas.
I have plans to tie more side charas to MC’s story, in a more intimate and non-conversational way. And t r y … to develop their arcs in that manner, but I’m not sure how that’ll work out in reality.
It'll probably be okay.
Oh yeah, also, Romance~~
WORLD-BUILDING
I mentioned this before, but I’m gonna try to withhold certain information, so their reveal will be more satisfying later on. I know the older readers will have knowledge about some details due to the rewrite, but I’ll try my best to keep things spicy for everyone.
MAGIC SYSTEM
The fundamentals for this will not change, but I’m gonna add a lot of quality-of-life changes to the usage of Worlds. It will still be a Hard Magic System , but I’m gonna try and add a Softer side to it as well.
SETTING and WORLD BACKGROUND
Some things will be uncheatable, but they’ll be much rarer compared to the previous version. This will add a sense of risk to actions and give birth to more interesting choices.
MISCELLANEOUS STUFF
-No harem planned.
-There will be cliches, but I’ll give them my own touch. I think you'll like it a lot.
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Alright, I think that's it. Ask me if you have any questions ;3