Loved this story
need more chapters
Okay so let me just say—this assessment chapter is a masterclass in building tension and then absolutely delivering on it. You've got Lin Qiaozhi grinding ten thousand hammer strikes every night in her dreams, snapping over a hundred steel rods, and the author doesn't just tell us she's good, they SHOW us through the teachers' reactions. Wang Baiqiang literally can't believe a girl who started practicing AFTER submitting her application form has hands that clean. No injuries. Not even the web between thumb and index finger that every beginner gets smashed up. That detail alone tells you everything about her dedication. And then the payoff—three strikes. THREE. The steel rod snaps like it's nothing. The teacher marks his evaluation sheet, says "Not bad" like he's holding back absolute awe. I was sitting there like... okay, we all knew she was going to crush it, but the author still made me FEEL it. What I love about the plot structure here is the contrast. You've got all these other kids who either were forced by their parents or were just copying Lin Qiaozhi's energy, and they're all struggling. One kid's hammer literally flies out of his hand and he has the audacity to complain it hurts. Meanwhile Lin Qiaozhi walks in, calm as anything, and destroys the challenge. The perfect score reveal on the notice board—"a single perfect score stood prominently beside Lin Qiaozhi's name. It was impossible to miss"—that's the moment the whole chapter snaps into place. The plot doesn't just reward her effort, it makes her stand out in a way that's almost unfair. Which is kind of the point, isn't it?
I just started this book and I'm intrigued. impatiently waiting for the following chapters.
I couldn't stop scrolling!
Thanks for updating this book
Please update Ceo's hidden wife also
This is intriguing
Good work keep it going!!
Author, I really like this novel and how well it's written, and I appreciate you being busy and all but also I'm starting to lose interest. this is an update of 1 chapter every 5 or 6 days.
love this story ,wait somewhat patiently for updates
Hurry up, write some more!
She does have a lot to worry about. If pat killed her, she'll be saved from Michael and if Pat didn't kill her she'd be (almost) killed by Michael. She's in between the devil and deep blue sea #bestofluckzee