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Gostando muito da história até agora,a evolução e um pouco rápida ,mais tem uma boa base .
pra a história si desenvolver, o que me chamou atenção pra essa história foi seu título , do MC sendo obrigado a casa , e porque não tinha o gênero harém
Surpraisingly good for the standars webnovel has today.
I will definitly read it.
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There are lots of grammatical errors but the book is still readable so that's okay.
The story is great, makes you wonder what will happen in the next chapter. Good work!
I like how the character is made of, a cunning brilliant person who'd do everything to achieve his goal, an either righteous nor evil protagonist.
Pretty good overall at least where it is right now, characters relativ shallow but its still ok.
Storyline seems to be pretty solid, no surprises until now but also no logical loopholes.
Updating Stability will be able to be seen when its out of trial read.
I personally like it
awesome storylines and twist in the chapter, you wont even know what is real and nightmare till the next chapter star, absolutely recmended.
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Overall, it's a 5 star imo, the worldbuilding is nice and the first chapter sets a tone for the rest of the story, the characters are fleshed out and have their own personalities, the only problem I had was the grammar which can be easily fixed
this was really my work my acc was been hack 3 months ago and unfornunately i cannot update the novel sorry for the old fans who enjoyed it but i will try to make a new one.
At first glance, this novel is just like any other novel Xianxia, an MC seeking power in a world filled with dangerous beasts and selfish cultivators.
However, what is different here is that the MC is not a super genius with a cheat cultivating technique that overpower everybody, don't get me wrong, he is strong and has some cool OP skills, but he won't get an easy time in his journey.
Expect to see an MC facing hardships, committing mistakes, and struggling to overcome stronger foes, and expect as well see him growing.
PS.: This is my first attempt at writing, so the beginning is no as good as it should be, but I promise that the quality is improving in real-time.
PS2.: English is not my first language, and it had been 10 years since I last studied grammar properly, so you may see some grammar problems, but I am back studying English and these problems will be fixed in time.
Give a chance to this novel, leave a comment and review.
And thanks to all of you who read this novel.
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