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the synopsis is a wonder.
it's interesting .
nicely made, the story line.
needs a little twist from my side.
for the readers to be precise.
but it's fairing nicely so far.
keep it up .
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Too many brain dead fools in this novel. ???.................................................. ...................................................... .....................................................
I just blazed through the entire story today and the quality of the story is amazing! The character interactions are depicted really well and I think that the personalities are introduced organically. I'm looking forward to how the story develops. Author, please keep up the good work!
Very Interesting so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I don’t usually review but this is VERY, VERY, VERY similar to online game: i posses a monster merging simulator. The abilities aren’t similar but the PLOT is definitely very similar. First of all the tyrant guild becoming the enemy is very much what happened in monster merging. Second of all the Rosetta guild or whatever which is full of women and the guild leader taking interest in the MC is basically the same exact thing in monster merging just a different guild name and a slightly different plot. This is based on me being on chapter 10, if people don’t understand what I mean check out “online game: i posses a monster merging simulator”. If you read this you’ll understand how similar plots are and it’s just a novel with a different names and abilities but the main plot is similar.
This book will be better if it had a good proof reader because the way it change from his to her is just too much man is hard to know who is meant to be talking sometimes
What is this even? He gets company shares like nothing. Where do they come from, you cant just get 70% of a company. Where do these shares come from? The former share holders all died at the same moment? If you are using a world setting that is supposed to be close to reality you have to use some logic while writing.
And how do you think people are supposed to get an impression on the story with 5 free chapters? No one unlocks/buys chapters to a book he doesnt no anything about on this platform.
the story is good even there are so many hole in the story
the world setting is average, I can even say I read many similar background
normal starting setting
but the big problem is that author makes MC idiot ic sheeett
read if you want don't wanna read this kind of novel that MC is trash to the finest .
Please update new chapters. I beg you!
I don't mind even if I pay tickets....
I won't reduce a star in my review due to updating stability. So please....
(A member of the still waiting group.)
This MC is exceptionally arrogant and insecure, he truly has little redeeming qualities. .
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