Viadhivan_Ranata
i like it reading novels is really way hard for me and i can't get past to it because it's too long and some of it was already finished and i having a hard time keeping up to read the story and I suddenly see this novel just now and after a couple of minutes i got hook from reading it regardless the story is quite interesting i might continue reading this novel
I LOVE THE CREATIVITY OF THIS BOOK. THIS WRITER IS OUTSTANDING ?
I Love love love love love love love love love love love love this novel. You should read it, especially if you love beast taming novels.
A well written with a good pacing of the story and interesting as well as intense scenes with every chapter. Keep writing and upload more chapters, author.
Ima big fan of your tog post's also goodluck man
Absolutely just stunning. everything absolutely on point.
I had already read the first story and decided to give this re-release a chance. After reading 168 chapters, I noticed that this story had quite a lot of changes. 1- It doesn't make sense for a human who died and was in a sort of "limbo" as a soul to be able to use abilities and deceive Death itself.2- For someone who has an entire lifetime of experience and has just reincarnated, it doesn't make sense for his first decision to be seeking revenge because the previous owner of the body joined a tournament and died.3- How does he manage to use his martial arts skills in a body with no experience, muscle memory, or preparation? At this moment, he has the experience, memories, and theoretical knowledge from his previous life... It doesn't make sense for him to fight and defeat people more powerful than him currently.4- Why does someone with a lifetime of experience, knowledge, techniques, and life lessons get so drastically influenced by the current body even after so many chapters?!5- Again, how can someone with so much life experience attempt revenge/murder so poorly prepared and impulsive, to the point of not even worrying about properly planning for possible complications?6- After the national tournament ends, he suddenly decides to travel in search of his supposed mother, whom he neither knows nor has solid information about. Arriving at the city where he will board the boat/ship, he suddenly becomes a companion/adventure buddy with someone he just met and accepts any decision from this person, even knowing what happened with his father. Because of this, they are captured and sold as slaves. Again, how can someone with so much life experience be so dumb?!I'll stop here because there are too many things that don't make sense and are just thrown in our faces without any or almost any coherent explanation from the author. I would prefer the plot/story of the original book. [ Google Translator ]
It’s an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.
Even though the grammar was not over the top, I really loved the beginning. Jay better be ruthless to Humans as he was with Monsters or I would be disappointed. Looking forward to upcoming chapters. Keep it up.
It's one of the best Villain webnovel which is very interesting to read to the end I have only one request to the author please do not drop this novel.
Dear Readers,First of all, thank you so much for giving my novel a chance! ? I want to start by being upfront, English is not my first language. So, if you come across mistakes or awkward phrasing, I hope you can forgive me. I promise that I will work hard to improve my writing skills as the story progresses. Your patience and support mean everything to me!...Now, about the story,This novel is my passion project, and I’ve poured a lot of thought into creating a unique world where portal, monster, clans and conflicts exists. I am also planning to introduce many interesting thing so, just read and enjoy Jay's journey, from a normal human to clan leader to strongest person in the world. I hope to get your full support in endeavor.Thank You @Mystical_Watcher
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