author has a good command of language, a few grammatical errors but of course it is a new novel and will be edited. An interesting plot of cultivation that has a lot of potential to become one of the greatest on this site. the characters, and their backgrounds are well thought out, and definitely will keep a reader intrigued. best of luck to the author, keep writing?
Decent novel. Quite good so far. Author should use “Grammarly” to fix grammatical error. Its free, so use it. Hope the novel will be better. Good luck author.
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Compulsory 5 star rating for myself because I am a shameless author.This story is 99% smut and 1% nightmare fuel. There is a plot, but it is not that complicated. The MC is looking for a master. Actually, that is about it, so why like 500 chapters long? 99% smut! Just enjoy it for what it is. Don't think too much. I certainly didn't. Also. There are parody of a lot of other stuffs, mostly other people works because I am having fun. Shouldn't you be?Join the Aspectual Discord Server!
I'm thrilled to be reading this novel and I like that the MC is not too OP I wish he would not be clueless when it comes to all these female friends of his also I really like his girlfriend she is the best possible fiance for him she loved him even when he was a nobody
For me it's awesome novelThe story development really my cup of teaThe comedy, romance, character interaction everything is really good (except mc denseness but i quite like it)And once again author, NO NTR
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I thought this would be okay at best, but thankfully I was wrong. This is pretty d*mn good. The MC is OP, but instead of ruining things, it makes them more entertaining/interesting.
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ok, it was easy enough to read all of what's been translated so far, but it was kind of boring tbhif any of the other trial reads are any good (haven't read them yet) you should maybe pass this one over
spoiler free review.ngl i kinda ramble a bitokay, I'm about halfway through at the time of writing this (113 chapters), so i think i can give a well-informed review. Im not a critic, so I'm not gonna write like one. I'll just put down my opinions. The concept alone is very original, and the initial world building is super solid. (If a little quick in the first chapter) The MC is relateble and understandable. he's also my favorite type of MC that isn't really the HERO type but only looks out for himself and those close to him but also isn't heartless. (also known as the Bai Zemin build) his specific overpowered gimmick is also not over the top, and he uses it well for the ost of the time. had a moment in the 100s that seems a little questionable) ge can use any ultimate limitlessly but not EVERY ultimate. so, not as OP as it could be. there's lolis, that's always a plus. The MC wears a mask in the game, but we never get a description for the mask, and that's literally my biggest problem with the whole book. is it a surgical mask? a domino mask? a cowl? is it like an oni mask? or something closer to the anbu from Naruto? he got a helmet at somepoint how the heck is that gonna work. descriptors is another issue i have (aside from how pretty the girl are) we don't really get descriptions for people outside of when they are first introduced so its easy to forget what the characters are supposed to look like. and the same thing with skills but to a lesser extent. YOU WILL forget what some of them do. to not go out on a negative note, the MC also isn't the type to keep a low profile to avoid trouble and doesn't hide his name. definitely not the "mystery expert that no one knows about" type. such face slapping, much humiliation