The first thing that stands out is beautiful writing. It's very emotional and quite exquisite read. The writer did a fine job in picturing the main character's emotion, as it flows nicely and is immensely descriptive, as personally, I somehow could feel his sorrow and emotion in quite vivid details. Dave Dalton as the main character, is a well-written and quite multi-dimensional character, an interesting character. His love for his late fiancé is what I like most in this story. In short, it's definitely a very good read for those who are into hopeless romance.
I've read only 4-5 chapters yet So don't know where the story is goingI liked it but dear author what's with the pointless and needless use of Japanese words/verbs the totally make the story feel out of place With a mediaeval western world building use of Japanese words makes me feel awkward while reading especially the use of word seishin or whatever which is important part of the world's power system As a non-japanese reader who completely doesn't understand the words' meaning it makes me turn my back on the storyI really hope you can change the use of Japanese words with more familiar English words or atleast translate those words into English
I highly recommend this but I do have to warn the unsuspecting reader. The updating stability is shit, in fact, this story may very well be dropped and we have no idea. So yeah, buckle up.
I've read berserk and this reminds me a lot of it I can't wait to see what happens next especially when it's as dark as thisps takeyoshi sensei do us justice with this novel
Niceee. Minimal grammar errors and a gripping sequence! I'm really really into the detective and mystery genre so I have quite high hopes with this novel :>
This novel is probably one of the best I’ve ever read and I’m glad qidian has decided to endorse it and to translate chapters of it so that people of other nations can enjoy it. This I applaud them for, however it has come to my attention that there has not been an update in at least 3 months. For someone who enjoys this novel very much this is very sad so I would like to ask qidian to have someone continue to translate this novel. Qidian has posted that there will be at least 5 chapters a week. This promise that they made seems to have been broken and I as a reader would like to ask qidian to keep their promise as an organization. Again I’m really happy that a site/app like qidian entered into the world of web novels as it gives organization to the industry. So I ask qidian as an organization to uphold their promise of 5 chapters a week, and if they plan to drop the series then they should at least inform us as their readers.
bro don't drop this novel i'm really enjoying the story and the characters and hope you'll back soon
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it started well with RUNES but after joining academy it transformed completely into beast taming with no usage of Runes at all......WHERE ARE THE RUNES GONE AUTHOR?????
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A funny novel but low updates At least 7 ch week should be schedule also till now i only found one fault ie age of cultivators Its too much ????????????????????????????????????????????????????