Far as i read it's very good, i really like it.... I'm new in writing so I'm not expert on pointing wrongs but all i can say is that it's very good and captivating... Overall i rate this at 5 personally..... Good work dude
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This could be a good story if the grammar and the pronouns are correct...
good novel, please don't drop...........
I haven't read much, but from what I've read, it definitely peaks your curiosity, though I think a lot happens too quickly, but that might be because it's the beginning and it also might slow down later on. overall it is definitely worth a read, worth a chance ? best of luck author ?I'll continue to read
First novel I read in here and I'm hooked, it's really great, especially because despite technically being a romance, there is not much of that and I like that, I really enjoy Natasha. My favorite character was her, until, Chaos! Chaos is absolutely the best one, I find his scenes with whoever the most entertaining, and Natasha blooms in her interactions with him. And it's not just because I'm a cat person. Can't wait for her to take her revenge to the next level!
Slow down with the new stories I can only read so many bangers at time. My coins and fast passes are already stretched thin as it is with all the stories I read?.
This is amazing, man. I can feel that we might be related somehow author. The only issues that I have are that there are not enough chapters, and the ? needs more details if possible. keep up the effort author big ups from me.
they reach the blurb about chapter 95 x I really hope this book updates!!
Killian chimed in on this comment, "Yes she did. Did you know your daughter is skilled in swordsmanship? She had a match with one of my finest knights this afternoon and could have cut his head off had she followed through with her blow and had a proper sword to wield."
And i see my friend, my friend that usually accompany me to go to school.
Madisgood race is normaly like that, they speak in a high tone.