absolutely emaculate it astonishing how amazing this story is in my opinion one of the best story I've seen so far and other than a few and minor Grammer mistakes I would say this is a great story well worth the read
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader I got sunk in this world the author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read :)
I really enjoyed the read, I think beyond anything this book could definitely be looked back on in the past based on to its allusions to issues happening worldwide. Vocabulary was top notch, and I thought I used a bunch of words in my story but this has to take the cake.
It has an interesting storyline. The plot was very intriguing. The story pulls the readers to read more of it. The story's progress was well-paced, and the placement was comprehensible. The characterization was also relatively good, but it gets shaky during conversations.
However, the lack of details to descriptions was making it a little confusing at times. There are few grammatical and punctuation errors that need to be revised and edited. Even if the story was successfully conveyed to the readers, I think that it would be best to work on those issues because I believe that this story has great potential and could be better.
No offense meant to the author, and I wish you the best of luck!
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When I first started reading this story I was extremely intrigued by the world background and how descriptive the author is in his writing. I thought the characters were outlined and described enough that I did not have to guess what the author was trying to say. I have loved reading this story. It keeps me on my toes and I find my self wanting more and more. I definitely recommend giving it a read it.
Compulsory Author Review :/Now that we’ve basically reached the end of Volume 1 Arc 2 (Chapter 23), I thought to write a review. Also use this comment section as Q&A if need be. The synopsis is pretty sh * t so I need to work on that. The story is one of character growth: MAIN CHARACTER:Here we have a fat, middle-aged dork who has to change his ways from becoming reclusive and not being anything to speak about, to becoming rich, charismatic, physically strong, and se * ually capable. It will take a while. From these first two arcs, I think I have presented how insufferably pathetic he can be, but also how much potential he has in the tank to become the 4 traits I mentioned earlier. His lowered moral inhibitions will also play a factor in propelling him (rather rapidly) to become an interesting individual and great MC.HAREM:My goal is to make the female characters as 3 dimensional as possible, while also making Samuel’s encounters and relationships with each as interesting as possible. I plan to cap the harem to about 8-12 women (including inc * stuous relationships). Flings and s * x friends may be considered once he is actually rich, but for now solid relationships is the way. Harem will be diverse and cater to many fetishes: M * LFs, V * rgins, Bullies, Twins, Bookworm and everyone’s mother lol. The whole lot. As highlighted in the synopsis, this story will also delve a lot into MC’s interactions with the world at large (AU Earth)… how he grows rich and the details of the process, as well as how he slowly becomes a ‘Chad’.SYSTEM:The non-sentient system is a complex tool at Samuel’s behest, that constantly grows and is honestly one of the most attractive features of the story I’ve written in my opinion. I can’t think of what else to mention here. If you have any questions, leave a comment and I’ll answer promptly. P.S: Please give my story until chapter 15-20 before considering if it’s worthy to continue reading. I am confident your impressions of the story will change many times over these initial chapters anyway. Happy reading.
This is a pretty good military-isekai. I enjoy reading it and am genuinely curious as to how the story will progress.
In my new work on the pursuit of immortality by the main character, to the extent of venturing and investing in space exploration, when compared to other humans, what he lacks the most is not time. Please readers bear with any issues that might be related to word quality. Try my best, and please support this novel!
The Smiling, Proud Wanderer is a Wuxia novel by Jin Yong (Louis Cha). It was first serialized in Hong Kong in the newspaper Ming Pao from 20 April 1967 to 12 October 1969.
Alternative Names:
• Laughing in the Wind
• State of Divinity
• The Peerless Gallant Errant
• The Proud and Gallant Wanderer
• Xiao Ao Jiang Hu
• 笑傲江湖
Translators:
• Lanny Lin (Chapter 1 - 21)
• HHaung (Chapter 21)
• Pokit (Chapter 21 onwards)
• Bliss (Chapter 30 and 31)
Editor:
• HHaung (Chapter 21 onwards)
The reason I'm putting up this novel is so I can read it for personal use. I watched the State of Divinity (1996 TV series) and loved that show. I knew there was a Novel of it but never spent the time to look for it until now. Was reading it online but the chapters very LONG and I keep loosing track of where I left off so I came here. Reading it off Webnovel is so much easier especially since it keeps track of where you left off. Unfortunately Webnovel has a 20k word / 100k character limit for each chapter so I had no choice but to chop up the chapters into parts.
For those who also want to read this feel free. I am not taking someone else's work and passing them off as my own, full credit is given to the original writer, translators and editor as listed in the descriptions, plus the content of this novel is free online in multiple sources for everyone to read. So putting this up on Webnovel is just for my own convenience sake and anyone else who wishes to read this.
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