I'm fan of cultivation novel, this is one of the good so far I've read. The story has so much potential. Currently I'm at chap.150 and I wanted give few advice if author don't mind .1. I noticed you skipping 90% of fight just by announcing the result. IMO it'll be more entertaining if add how he defeated hus opponent or how he was defeated in a fight.2. In important fights even try to the give description of the technique, stance how the weapon look like etc3. Add more detail while describing character because it help us imagine the in head. Like what their height how their figure ( silm, skiny, well bulit etc) how the look like, what they're waring etc.4. If you can then give us a auxiliary chapter regarding details of cultivation realm, like the name of the initial level, grades of alchemist and formation master, also level of the alchemy item (Pill, Potion), array level, weapon grade etc.
If you just came from a heavy and upsetting novel this is a great one to pick up your mood.I love the story and characters. The novel is light and refreshing without very much drama or things that could make you sad.I hope that this novel will get picked back up again because I really enjoyed the chapters which have been made so far.
I think I can't say much it's a lovely novel, with really good story development and I look forward to read the second book, but u really notice it's not a god translation.
I fucking love this story! Im not a pyscho, but the story just makes me want to laugh when it starts getting violent. Now, there is some unnecessary philosophical stuff and the author barely updates. It might just be me, but im always waiting for the story to update and it feels like forever when it does.
SO, pLEAse AUThoR Update MoRe.
I do quite like the book and I am a bit disappointed that the book wasn't even picked especially with the kinds of books that were picked.I am not saying their bad but i feel like I want a book that is different and this book is different especially with the MC being relatable.I love money...the MC loves money so I feel like we can definitely connect :D
the story is actually fine, read other reviews for that. This is a review on webnovel. WHY THE FRICK WOULD YALL CHOOSE A BOOK WITH a GRAND TOTAL of 1 VOTES!!! WTHECK WEBNOVEL!
this is a book which I wish I could give anti-energy stones to.
MC is clearly a Mary Sue, he's given OP abilities, and then any time he has a problem which can't be solved by what has already been revealed, an other OP ability is received, there are no stakes, not tension, there is just the MC for most of it, and the other characters are paper thin, so there isn't any good character dynamics either.
oh, and also, it doesn't even seem to hold consistent with its own logic.
TL;DR: Do not waste your time reading this trash fire.
The author has done a good work in trying to add mystery and I look forward to how the story turns out! Please keep writing
here author sama you said you wanted a rewiew so here it is
so far the story is well written and i'm enjoying it and i'm waiting for more chapters
the descriptions are good and the world creation is excellent but I didn't really like the "schemes" of some characters but that's just my personal taste
and i have some questions for you author sama
Could you give a description of the appearance of the protagonists?
and is ama love the protagonist's love interest?
and a suggestion? perhaps? I just want to talk about a power that I think is cool and that I wanted to see in history the weakest affinity of the protagonist is time, right? but I would really like if the protagonist uses temporal powers
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