What a fun book! The story development is great and the characters are also well formed. I like how cute their banter is ? It's very amusing. Great writing! I recommend reading this book!
Interesting start, can't wait for more. Here's to hoping you'll win the WPC.. .. .. ... ... .. .. .. .. .... .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
The story is rather promising but please before you continue writing your chapters overwork your former ones. Correct wrong written words and your gramma.There are on mass of free online tools who would help you improve the quality.
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I have never done a review before but holy does this book deserve it.
(If I did not need to make sure that it had 140 words spaces and letters this review would have been 69 letters and spaces long)
Ive read chapter 102 and i think something is wrong with luke, I wonder if perhaps he might actually be an even older primordial than nyx and Gaia maybe he might be the Chaos primordial
As with all the hints author been giving i feel my guess might be correct
I'll be blunt.
Fans of sign-in novels have a mental illness. There's no conflict, there's no tension - power isn't earned, it's just given. This isn't altogether terrible by itself (wish fulfillment can be great fun). What is terrible however is how seriously sign-in novels take themselves. They pretend as if anything the MC does actually matters, when in-fact, the MC could fall asleep on the bus and wake up barraged with 'supreme', 'godly', 'divine', 'platinum' rewards.
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Would read but poor
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Nice book it's too much nice book I recommend this book it's nice book let's read it by enjoying the mystery and the ghost I highly recommend this book it's very nice
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u know I have always wondered why is that India has so many great literaturrs but we don't get to see any fantasy novel related to those. it's a very nice and new idea , I support you wholeheartedly, keep up the good work, thanks for this story