Its pretty funny not going too lie but the translation quality brings it down because it is not great. Pretty enjoyable so far and i haven't noticed any face slap Bs
You really shouldn't let him hide his identity there are to many like that and it gets bad as the story goes on I really like the novel so far keep it up.
Good story .Very detailed .I have never read a NPC story ,but I liked it .This story has good potential .Keep it up author .We need more updates !!
I felt the concept was pretty good. It has potential but the author clearly didn't execute it well.
The way the story has developed till here just makes me cringe.
The first few chapters we're pretty good. It would've been a great novel if the quality of the translation and writing was consistent.
Who else is here because of Grandmist_Sage?
அவரது உள்ளங்கைகள் ar esweaty முழங்கால்கள் பலவீனமான கைகள் கனமான அம்மாக்கள் ஸ்பாகெட்டி அவரது bervous ஆனால் நான் அவர் அமைதியாக தெரிகிறது மற்றும் குண்டுகளை வீச தயாராக உள்ளது. மொத்த கூட்டம் மிகவும் சத்தமாக செல்கிறது
Cliche after cliche...also, the unrealistic qualities of the story...furthermore, I feel like it's leading into a modern day harem situation! if not that, then the MC is a hypocrite and falls for any girl who shows him a little interest or is good looking enough. For a guy who is supposed to be all tough and everything, he has no spine in being straight up with the females...he acts so ambiguous. I had such high hopes for this story and it failed me.
First the concept of the story is truly a breath of fresh air, but I do not know how the story has such an overall good rating. Yes, it's decent,but the writing quality is poor at best. There are a lot of gaps in the wording that just plain don't make sense. It also is obvious that the author isn't native English speaker because the translation is shoddy. Don't trust all the reviews they're just heeping praise with no criticism to help the author fix the mistakes which shows they're probably mostly paid reviews. Some may not but I'm not multilingual so I don't understand most of the reviews.
Firstly, I Just want to say that this is a cultivation novel, so the bar is already low. Here is my review:Not bad but it doesnt lives up to hype. Mc survives a lot of near death experiences using his system. But that would mean he was going to die without the system and his prior knowledge. Then how did the Main character in his book survive? We are told that he is reincarnated in his own book yet he just has some general knowledge and thats about it. If this was a normal 'reborn in past' story, it would be exacly same. He acts like this isnt even his own book. He literaly has too many ways to escape the bad events yet he doesnt.
A nice Novel written by a nice author. He has great skills. I hope he does note chapters and make us readers, enjoy.May the stars align for him.
Muito obrigado pela história, é muito difícil achar uma história de LOTM e ainda mais uma história que seja interessante igual a sua. O começo foi muito bom e é atualizado diariamente então eu vou dar 5 estrelas pra você, continue com essa maravilha. ??
a very well written story you gonna love n hate Liam on how manipulative he is but the same time be amaze in his devotion of love towards Lea