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Very intriguing! I can't wait to find out what happens next! The only disappointment was that there are only four chapters available to read at the moment.
I can see that the author tried his best to make it epic. There's nice worldbuilding, though I would like it if you stretched that more. The main problem is stretching... your story looked too easy... stretch it, make ot more difficult and make it as believable as possible.There are quite a few grammatical errors... you should solve them asap, especially the punctuations.The writing style is easy on the eye with a bit of fixing it would be even more promising... Good luck... Author.
So far the story is well written and interesting enough to keep you hooked for more.Hopefully author will push up his release rate a bit ?
................................................................................................................................ok can be accepted
First the cover pic! Then synopsis! And then the story!Amazing plot!!nicely written!!!!!!keeping going author! don't drop it in between!!
update stability-5/5everything else-0/5just couldn't manage to continue,mtl , it's horrendous,it just doesn't tick my box,tough to read...
a top tier right here, an op mc that doesn't hide.......................... ..................................................... .........
It's quiet interested, in which not mention of the background of protagonist but start with rock pirates era as a son of whiteboard which is quite interesting and also the story devolopment is also quite good but the tier thing didn't made scence waiting for further updates.
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I can't believe it. A good novel in Trial Read.
First, World Background and MC Character design is very normal and really not relevant to this novel. MC is more like an NPC who plays different roles, depending on the kind of funeral story he takes part in. Most of the time the MC isn't even there, not even as an observer.
Why do I still think this is absolutely one of the best novels on webnovel?
Because the author manages to create real emotion in me with every short story leading to and about the funeral of really interesting and unique characters.
At least I feel that way while reading, in hindsight this novel is full of cliches and stock image characters.
But all this doesn't matter while reading, because the writing, and I assume the translation, quality is JUST THAT GOOD!!!
If I ever recommend something, give this novel a try. I can't describe just why I am touched so deeply by this, but please please for once, let a good novel pass trial read.