I really like this novel and it's my favorite novel now. I had enough of all the stupid mcs who think with their **** and does stupid young masters so i was looking for a like time for a novel like this l. But the translation is a little bad partly because he doesn't has an editor to help and the problem is nobody likes these types of novels they like does annoying harem novels withs lots of faceslaps. What basically happens in those novels is tge mc goes to a place the annoying young master looks down on him then he starts to fight the antagonist says the name of his technique the bystanders keep says the mc is going to lose he is week he can't win and then bam!!!. O and it still isn't finished the young masters whole family goes after hin annoy him till he destroys the family. And the keeps on repeating itself. I used to like it years ago when i first started read Chinese novel but now it's very annoying and keeps on getting on my nerves. What i hate in Chinese cultivation novels:1: fighting enemies with cultivation a lot more the you. 2: be very young but still stronger and smarter than people millions of years older then you.3: heals limbs and his whole body easily even when he becomes a lot stronger.4: Cultivate with a unique technique and become so strong the cultivation levels don't matter (one of my favorite things in novels is when he enters new cultivation realms so my favorite movels Re the ones whose cultivation is the same as everybody alse.5: Harems And forget many othe important ones.
Can the story get update at a more regular basis . It’s been to long sense the last chapter got updated . The story is great and I really enjoy it ,it just needs a more regular posting schedule .
A great story that I have read tons of MTL. Really intriguing and exciting. I just hope that it doesn't have too much of it cut out or censored!Worth the read!
Extremely boring. It's basically a rehash of coiling dragon. What's with all the zero chapter read five star reviews dominating the front page...My biggest problems with the story are pacing, followed by poor world building and one dimensional characters.Mentioning a city with tens of millions of people, how many thousands of cities, provinces, worlds and star systems there are do not equat to world building. You have to show that the world around you matters. Did your mc lost his flying bison in a city and it's so vast you can't find it? If not, than it doesn't matter how many hundreds of millions of people are in the city, they are but numbers and irrelevant and GOD, is the entire world in this story so irrelevant! It seems like nothing is happening in the world unless the mc is interacting with it. There are no sense of realism there. Mc lives in a castle, goes to some other castle, kills someone as a mission, comes back, mopes around in his castle because that's how you run a city, and voila he's the strongest in the world and goes to some place and...God the story lacks pacing and so many poorly done time skips. Show that passing of time matters before you do a time skip, not just when you need a powerup and can't find a way to engage your readers. ISSTH did a hundred year skip and I wasn't mad because before that I was with the mc on his day to day adventure, learning how important a day can be. And god the time skips in this story are so lame. He basically goes from zero to hevean rank in a few dozon chapters and heaven to legend in a couple more and by a hundred he achieves transcendence, the level that author introduced to be strongest at the start of the story. How do you keep writing once you've done that? Why, do a dbz twist, introduce a few more levels.And do you know how many interesting things happen to his life in the time he gets op as fk? You can count them on one finger, that's four if you are lazy, and god this story is so lazily written!You know, you can still feed on a lazily written, poorly paced story in a vacuum world, if the characters and their banters make up for it, and believe it or not, author fks that up really spectacularly. The characters have no depth, no complexity, no autonomy, no agency. They just exist to fill up a space. The two loving parents that got in trouble to motivate the mc, the cute lil bro to motivate the mc, the backstabbing gal to motivate the mc and hype the mysogonist fan base, none of them serves any other purpose and once you realise how utterly robotic and dull the characters are, how do you connect with them in any way? At least make up for their lack of personality with quips or humor but no, it's a serious story. A seriously dull story.And fk this Alice trope. When you have less personality than a side character with no dialogue, you don't get the girl, deal with with.
Another “slap everybody” novel. The main hero is god of martial arts from the start, so all fights are boring, and the only story development slightly interesting, but skipping chapter after chapter waiting when slapping would over and story continues it is not what I want to read.
After ZF's problematic personality trait, there's the females characters...they're getting more and more irritating like the head nurse LJ and that JS girl. I juste hope that we won't see them often, the best will be that they don't appear again but I highly doubt that it will happen...
Translation becomes MTL after chapter 100??????Translation becomes MTL after chapter 100??????Translation becomes MTL after chapter 100??????Translation becomes MTL after chapter 100??????
I absolutely love it. I love the way the story is setup. Have to say, I did not see all of it coming. Like the world setup and then the characters. It was really wonderful, and I love your writing techniques.
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author could i ask you a question?? since this is a cultivation novel, will the MC's adoptive family have a chance to reincarnate in the future events and could reunite with him??
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Don't bother reading here with the ****ty translator, plus us having to pay for this crap AND sometimes having to pay twice because a chapter mysteriously get deleted. Go to *********full, you won't have to suffer this bull**** my fellow daoist.