The story has an interesting idea but the development is trash You don't actually know what's going on and there's no explanation for how things level up or what resources are or in depth explanation on his so-called cheat ability
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Obligatory Author Review :3 please give my book a try, although it won’t progress quickly since I have an unnatural updating time. Maybe I’d update once a week, maybe once a month. Anyways school is annoying so please forgive me :3
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Just a waste of my time?
Giving out five stars for giving out a very amazing story. How the story was plotted is interesting. Would love to know more about this. Waiting for more chapters.
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why did you lock the chapter so early?Why one chapter cost 3 Fast Pass?
Author does an amazing job of building a world, it's like reading a fascinating history book of an unknown world. doesn't waste time giving you the meat and potatoes of information and sets the scene for the world immediately.
From an early viewpoint this is a very detailed story on the 1 soul, 2 bodies premise! Great integration of fantasy elements and tropes into the story, with very nice character design and development. The only thing I’m confused about is about what the author said near chapter 53 about them saying that premium chapters would only be integrated as side stories, which were optional. Did something change? All of the chapters after chapter 54 are premium.