First of all, I have to say that the author's writing experience is oozing out of the chapters that I read. It overshadows a lot of the amateur works on this platform. It is creative and has perfect wordplay and brilliant scenes. The characters don't feel bland and one-dimensional like many others but they have a realistic touch.Overall, this book is a must-read.
I love the story development and it interesting can wait to find out who are parents actually are
This is a interesting story with a cool color. I liked the interactions of the characters. I would recommend this story. Keep up the good work.
I hope this book is not like others I've read in the past, before there was a novel that I really liked but I had to put it down. the reason was that the author's knowledge of geopolitics was simply ridiculous, in the story three or four European countries appeared, the same for the asian continent. and in the americas there was only the united states, with some citations to canada, a country completely irrelevant in the global scenario. countries like iran, israel, turkey, south africa, brazil and indonesia were simply ignored as if they didn't exist.
I love this story I hope someone can make this a picked novel, or tell me the raw please! I wanna know more about Su Chen’s adventures. I hope this can update more in the future.
This book is lit
I don't get why is this novel been translated if it has already been dropped by the author instead of other novels that are better and have been left forgotten by the translators?
Finished the Story. Lots of Spoilers.
This story has few things going for it but many things against it.
The story is 5(?) story written by the author and is probably the latest one. The story was completed just 5 months ago. And this brings us to the problem. How can author with such experience write such a poor story?
It's short and fast but the story itself is neither funny nor intresting enough to keep your attention.
Pros :
1: With 660 chapters it's a pretty short Xianxia and System Novel.
2: It has slight comedic elements.
3: It's a system novel.
Apart from these three I couldn't find any reason to read this story.
Cons :
1: MCs character is highly one dimensional and conflicting. His behaviour changes with his mood. One moment he is preaching peace and the next he is destroying a whole sect and murdering everyone from the Ancestor to new recruits.
2: His motive to gain power is poor. The whole story is poorly executed. Power so he can relax and enjoy? Okay. But here you are trying extremely hard to do so when you could have done it through way simpler methods.
3: Lots of plot holes, incomplete story lines and half way buildup. Whether it's the flame tatoo he gets after killing a Buddhist Sect Ancestor or is the Dark god realm. Same way, it's not explained properly whether the Alliance is from other dimension, is one the same planet but just divided by a barrier or they from another planet. It just doesn't makes any sense. Similarly, what exactly is that nine headed bug? Way too many incomplete story lines.
4: Cultivation system is shabby? Incomplete? Hastily made? I have no idea what to say. Almost all cultivation novels have becoming God as an end point. Here, it's not so. His strength makes him the strongest but the cultivation realm is not so. Their are many people in the same cultivation level. Thats it
5: The way he earns anger is through thrash talking. There are so many ways he could have earned anger. Vandalism, pranking, stealing...but no, the only way he thinks to do so is through the thrash talk.
6: System. It basically converts anger points to cultivation attributes. But it's not expanded upon. It's origin, it's end, its function. Nothing. Above all, after few chapters author just makes up some anger point number to suit his requirements.
All ina ll. Poor story.
This is a nice eastern fantasy story! I recommend it! I’ve never touched eastern fantasy story with male as the MC before, but this is quite refreshing. The beginning has already piqued my curiosity. Writing style wise, I won’t argue much abt the grammar although yes I think there’s a room for improvement. The plot itself is exciting. What I love the most is the character building bcos the author takes their time in building the characters. I can see the distinct personalities between them. And finally, it’s so refreshing to see such a nice family like Qin. I hv enough of my share with evil sisters and concubine. Thank you.
Anyway, keep up the good work author!
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This story has a fresh and unique story plot. It is really interesting. Keep it up author. I will support you on this and follow this story. I am looking forward how the little kid's life will change after the discovery.