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Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
aaaaa oml Istg the plot in this story inspired me- Like the way you write is really great! The characters, the plot, the situations, backstories, everything! Your grammar and way of writing is really my style! ;w; I'd recommend this book not gonna lie T^T❤️ I've only read 12 parts and it's already stunning! Great job! keep up the good work noc!! I've developed a crush for Ethan now-
This is a wonderful story...
You will be easily hook to this book because of its mc...
And most likely those women charactecters...
The story is great...
The characters are great...
The mc is great...
The fights is great...
Overall a wonderful story...
Started with a different work of the author's. Subtle recommendation for RMW. Jumped to DD. Binged the whole story within a few hours. Was it worth it? Yes. Would I recommend someone else to do the same? Also, yes. Will you enjoy reading an author bemoan the consequences of his success? I did. Will contribute to his suff- *cough* *cough* success? Yes.Story has a great MC. World slowing being built, and is leaving very realistic, yet fantastic situations to take place. Supporting cast is having foundation slowly being set, but not a whole lot is being told or described about them besides a little about his best friend and the female lead.Author has an awesome portfolio to show his character writing, so if nothing else, the interactions between characters will draw you in. Not a lot of story written so far, but I look forward to his continued success. Give it about 5 chapters if you aren't feeling sure after the first. Respect the Game. Persist to the End.
A better novel than most on this site but still gravely lacking:1) Story proceeds at a snail pace, there are so many filler chapters (with the main character reaching the first level of cultivation at chapter 190)2) The main character becomes progressively unlikeable (starts betraying his own race because he loves an alien girl)3) Half the chapters are romance, I did not come here to read a romance story.4) Cultivation levels are clear but applications of mana are confusing, there is new entire systems of utilisation getting thrown to the reader at random with massive info dumps and repetitions.Grammar is good but the story is so slow I can't recommend this to anyone. From chapter 100 to 200 there has barely been any development.
this novel is so dead so boringI can't read it anymore I tried telling myself something is better then nothing but this novel is so so bad.
This translation is almost MTL. Worst translation i read here.The content and world design is confusing, sometimes the decisions he made at one point are different in two different chapters.And the author really likes the old picture of women who can't do alything. It's really discusting.If I could I would give -5 stars
Very nice so far. Haven't seen any errors in your writing style and your word choices are quite intriguing, to say the least. Synopsis: Tbh, this is the only part of the book that I didn't truly like. I do find it appealing whenever authors include a section of the story within the synopsis which you did quite well. However, you never really mentioned what the story was about which is why I didn't give the full 5 stars. All I got from the synopsis was a little insight into the characters' personalities and that it seemed to be a cultivation novel. Would be good if you added a bit more information on the entire setting of the story.Writing Quality: You could normally consider me part of the grammar police. However, there were no mistakes that I saw within your grammar or writing. It was all perfect unless I overlooked something which I hope I didn't. Great Job!Story Development: Pacing is a little slow at the start but that's fine. Keep doing what you're doing.Character Design: Not much said here. You barely described the characters unless I overlooked something. You only used broad terms like "Beautiful" etc. But that's perfectly fine as it is a matter of preference. Some readers like to imagine how the characters look instead of having them described by the author.Overall, a great job so far. The book has potential and I wish you all the best author!
Welcome To The ALUCARD FamilyAuthor here: I just wanted to make a novel with magic , action , romance, ecchi with a op MC with a Successful Harem. it's just a package of all.I hope you enjoy it. I will try to upload regularly. Leave a comment It helps me understand the readers minds better.Don't forget to share.Thanks to everyone supporting me.ALUCARD
Sounded like a good idea but mc is stupid and trusted people He knew were hostile to him and lost his system . Then the novel went the basic loli assistant which just made me more annoyed. Then after complaining about being used in his human like the mc decides to help people who simply want to use him in this life. Basically it’s A cool story as long as you don’t Mind averageness and an mc who continously dosnt care about getting stronger or protection and just about helping random people who seem disgusted by him.
I thought the main character was an honorable guy but he's an emotional child. He even had someone sexually assaulted because they said his girlfriend might be cheating.