As of Chapter 38Writing Quality: 4/5Decent writing quality with some grammer mistakes here and there. This does not spoil the reading process at all. However, it is not perfect therefore a 4/5 rating.Story Development: 4/5 The progress of the story is pretty fluid so far. However, the meeting with his friend seemed abit rushed. Besides that the overall story progression is good. However, there feels like a few issues. For example in their first fight against the enemy. They said his friend teleported the group far away. However, the phrasing made it seem as if they got back to the mountain in no time. Besides that minir issue, the story was smooth.Character Design: 4/5The character design for the main character is mediocre so far. He shows a sense of nostalgia but it can be seen as he is not giving a strong vibe that he is himself yet someone else (might be confusing) which he should based of how the character is played. However, the side character is amazing as the show of hardship and stress really comes through to you. Update Stability: 5/5I do not know how fast and consistent the updates are. I am just assuming that the updates are perfect and daily.World Background: 4/5Not much is known as the story is pretty short still. But a decent amount of information has been given. However, the power system seems one dimensional right now. As a somewhat wuxia story, there needs to be abilities or skills that enables the reader to visualise it. There also needs to be a form of crafting. Considering the titlte the MC has he should have all these bases covered. So i feel as if the world background is not fully out there yet.Overall: 4.2/5A good novel so far. However, this novel has alot of potential to become a great one. It has certain key moments that can pull in the reader as well have well rounded characters overall. This is a great story for people to pick up if they are in for the long run. I would personally say the biggest issue with this novel is the lack of chapters so far. As more chapters come in I will come out with a new review. Good job so far with the novel ?
Ch. 1-13 don't seem to have anything to do with the rest of the story. Has there been some mistake? I'm confused. It's like somebody dropped those chapters in and deleted the originals.
wow. ill wait for this!!please provide many chapters! thanks! ??please provide many chapters! thanks! ??please provide many chapters! thanks! ??please provide many chapters! thanks! ??
I love this book it is easy to read and the mc is good. I just theres more free hour to read this book. I wish to have read the next dd4 so I can follow the story.
I'm giving up on this story improving in the late 400s (476 I think) and I'll say with a bit of bitterness that the sunk cost kept me reading much longer than curiosity or continued interest.The passive system in the earlier chapters is, while not original, it was not overpowered. There was potential for the system to develop and at points the system was expanded upon but at several turns those developments were abandoned entirely. By later chapters, drawing is arbitrary- there are detailed chapters of MC analyzing their current build, pointing out where the system has yet to completely break with the world building only for the system to give a handout at that exact moment...By then the MC is already jumping realms and tanking would-be threats so the introduction of more passive skills at that point is just padding and fluff. A number of story threads get abandoned early that, in my personal opinion, would have been more entertaining to read than a repeat of new city where everyone is stronger and geniuses scoff at MCs powerlevel. MC character development is something like going from just trying to survive, to planning to live long enough for the system to produce hundreds of skills, to a sense of self-awareness that their situation is constant danger and death is real possibility (if you allow a suspension of disbelief) and then finally having a ridiculous extra life and throwing caution to the wind.Highly disappointed in a work of fiction that shows a bit of self-awareness regarding common tropes in this sort of cultivation-based world building but still follows the template/formula and lets whatever originality it had at the start completely collapse on itself.
has potential but it will depend on how well the author writes the story, for I hope it's not similar to some Chinese novels that have a arrogant protagonist
The title sound badass but the novel a let down the MC is stupid always do stuff that put his family in dangerous and don't take advantage of the girl with the holy body or whatever to increase his strength.
What the **** man how can you just add so much comedic undertone in a serious novel like this.I mean I understand that you want stretch chapters but seriously I thought that it has lots of potential as I read the first couple of chapters then it came the idiotic undertone cliches
Although this novel is not exactly something to write home about, it’s a great choice for a change of pacw from the usual chinese novels.. So if you’re tired of the usual tropes and cliches of xianxia novels, this one has done a pretty decent job at avoiding them so far.. A modern world, fast paced guilty pleasure advanture that is a great choice when in need to waste a bit of your free timeIf there’s anything to not life about it then that has to be the MC. Though thats just my personal preference as I don’t take to well to kind people..
Its a generic wish fulfilment just turn off your brain and read until the end type of story no need to be to focused on it just read it as if passing time thats what I did so upto you
Hi author here, I’m just going to shamelessly give myself a great review. Not because I think the two chapters that are out are in anyway perfect, but because I believe the future of this novel will be amazing.
It will take you on a great journey along the way to an adventurous path with Alan, an extraordinary prince. Just go for it.????????????????????????????