This story has a great potential to become a good read if develop properly. However, there is a part that is bugging me. The protagonist said that he will never log out. How on earth will he sustain his body? Did he not need to eat or go in the toilet or take a bath for hygiene? Will he not die from starvation? He will need to log out to do all of those. Please give us a proper explanation about it. Well it is all that I was asking about. Though, is this going to be an harem because I hate those.
nugget died - 20% expnugget died - 20% expnugget died - 20% expnugget died - 20% expnugget died - 20% expnugget died - 20% expnugget is paralyzednugget is capturednugget is love nugget is life
YOU WOULD DEFINITELY REGRET IT IF YOU DON'T READ THIS!!! The writing style is superb, for stability of updates..well I just came here this morning sooo idk but I think it was 4chp/week (?). It hasn't developed yet but there's too much OPness!! The author is building the pillars for development by introducing the mc through other character's perspective which I think is nice. And as you know the synopsis was shouting "THIS IS GOING TO BE HAREM!!". welp, I don't really like harem bcz I've read too much of it but this story doesn't jump straight to that genre. This is worth the read!! While I'm here, I'll be advertising myself please read "Unspoken Words" lmao
dropped chapter 2 only because I found the very minor errors unbearableI have read from machine translation websites and my mind can filter the mistakes out, for some reason I couldn't do it with thisfirst chapter decent start, found that his father is a blacksmith unbelievable due to it being a dying tradewondering why he is cheerful finding mushrooms without explaining why he can differentiate the poisonous ones from the othersannoyed author had MC took a portable stove and not a flint striker for barbeque far more useful annoyed MC took his phone but didn't take a solar power charger
Loved this book please keep translating so freaking good ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
"great zhou" setting... Just this single piece of information is enough for me to drop this completely brain dead novel. Can't even create a slightly original setting, there's no way the rest of the novel is going to do any better
There was a book like this.But the mc was a slave from the begining.If this one have his own smithy and do what he wants i read it.If not forget it.
The work has a very good idea. A well summarized but relatively strange synopsis may not please many, so I suggest you take a look at it later. I can't give too much of a review given there isn't much content available at the moment, however. here are some things about the work: The writing is normal/okay and doesn't get in the way, but it could be improved. Grammatical errors are constant and, if possible or necessary, I highly recommend using tools that can help you fix this. Also remember to improve the spacing you use between lines; in some situations it was a bit confusing to understand the descriptions.The idea is cool and can be worked on to improve over time. I'll try to stay here on your journey, and I'll come back later to make further observations about the work. Finally, sorry for the somewhat "superficial" review, and keep up the good work.
don't read this one if your aren't a fan of glacial pacing I'm 55 chapters in and the MC is only level 4 and two days have passed so gonna be a long one
this story had a lot of potential but it seems the author is writing it wrong. the author seems to not have planned out the story and just keeps adding whatever he wants even though it ruins the story he set at the start. *SPOILER* for example, he first describes the female MC as a helpless person but later says how she would have been able to defend herself. its really inconsistent and ruins the flow of the story. as for how to fix it, it seems the only way is to start the story again.
One of the best trials reads I've read in a while. Kept me hooked the entire 40 chapters with the lore background, and the side characters who feel lifelike and not one-dimensional. The MC is well balanced. He is OP but he plans his moves out with healthy level of caution..I hope this novel gets picked it's been a while since I've been this excited about a new novel
Waste. Of. Time. F*ck this "ending". F*ck this "novel". F*ck this "author". F*ck all of this!