The story is very interesting with interesting characters. I hope there will be more chapters in the future.One thing I would like to suggest is to divide the longer paragraphs into shorter paragraphs. Maybe it is just me but it feels harder for me to read.
I see no reviews yet, so hey, first.I'm really ashamed, what have I done. I've abandoned my morals, and for what, everlasting glory? Bah! Meaningless!
absolutely amazing for ur first work, really waiting for new chapters,I hope this novel finds great success. I wish I may see u as a professional writer in the upcoming future ?
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I like the world building and how he’s not too overpowered from the start just beacuase he knows the future
Around chapter 280 I've liked the characters, since not just the mc are well developed, but now in not sure it's worth reading anymore, recent developments make me doubt this is worth spending any more on and make me feel it was just a waste of time between several characters blatantly ignoring what's in front out them for no apparent reason and the recent change in the direction of the story I'm mostly just feeling annoyed and not really enjoying it any more...
Love the exodus series keep up the good work
Hello Everyone, Author here, I`ll be pausing this Novel for now, I need to finish the 100th chapter of Supreme Martial System, And i`ll be continuing this together with Heavenly Sovereign on Earth afterwards. It's such a heart break for me, but i`ll continue this afterwards. Releasing three novels a day takes a lot of pressure, as I`m a Lone author, I hope you guys understand. I might come back here and update this novel once every now and then. But until i finish my volume 1 of Supreme Martial system, I`ll focus that first, only 22 chapters left! I`ll immediately update this two novels with massive releases don't worry.
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Great book, very promising beginning, deep lore and worldbuilding. Characters are fleshed out and novel does not seem to make every second character with cookie cutter is eastern fantasy tropes.
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